An old story, but I feel like this could become a series. It's always fun to see the sides of the Autobots whenever they're not in combat.

When I'm having a bad day, I go and find this story. It really makes me feel happy. Thanks for writing such an amazing story!

Awwwww! That is so sweet! I can never find a good enough fanfic on Elita and Optimus, as they are so rare! This was amazing, though I was a bit annoyed that Bumblebee and Spike interrupted them. Love it! I can't say it enough. You really captured the conflicted feelings in both of these amazing characters.

So cute! It's so nice to read well-written stories :D Thanks!

THis is the most adorable story... I really like your writing style everyone can read

Ooooooohhhhhh... Busted...

Aw, it's so adorable! X3

What a wonderful, sweet story! Well done. More like this one are needed.

That was marvelous!

Thank you!

That was extremely sweet and romantic. Nothing over the top, with just the perfect amount of innuendo. You don't see many stories like this around these days with just an innocent romantic twist to them. Vaguely reminds me of the grade-school note passing where you would draw two boxes with instructions on which to check depending on your feelings for the note writer.

The unspoken 'I love you' at the end was precious.

Kudos.

-Dreamchylde

Sque! I am so glad I finally got around to reading this! (I rarely have time for ficcage anymore. My thesis eats me alive. D:) Wonderful job! Srsly. I LOVE it when authors write for these two. So many people just cast Elita aside to get her out of the way so OP can be with their OC or Megatron or Bumblebee or something. I am a definite supporter of OP x Elita. Cutest pairing ever. 3

Their data pad discussion cutest thing ever. And the last little bit with Spike at the end was perfect. XD

I love the way you write. It flows nicely and is easy to read, not overcomplicated with oddly placed big words, and not so simple it looks like a third grader wrote it. It is just right. XD *applauds*

~ Lia Jax (AKA CiD Moonie)~

This is a really sweet story Jennie. You really approached it with a delicate touch which is greatly appreciated after wading through pages of heavy-handed angst. The ending was also the perfect punchline, though I do have to ask what Spike was doing at Cybertron at that moment, since neither of them were in Search for Alpha Trion.

Just as the title says: Beautiful.

Very nice. You have a good command of the source material, which makes the emotions here very truthful. I like how you managed the emotional arc of the story. Prime's iner and external voice was good. He can be hard to write. I like how Spike's quicker on the uptake there than BB. Trust a human to get the better read on the body language.

This was subtle and sweet and excellently done for a first fic in the fandom. As another supporter of Female Autobots, we definitely need well written stories that use the canon characters as well as this one does. I hope you continue writing!

Great one-shot. I just wishthat there was more Optimus PrimexElita One fics out there.