Very workable, and much better that what RTD actually did.

After Ianto died, I simply refused to watch Torchwood again. And to think they're showing Miracle Day on BBCAmerica right now. THE NERVE! I'm gonna go slink off and read more Janto fanfiction.

Thanks for giving my two favorite characters a happy ending. :D

Thankyou. DottyWho.

Bloody happy endings.
I LOVE THEM SO MUCH :)
But they make me emotional because Ianto died and now he is getting the perfect ending...
Oh it just makes me so happy...

People like you make the world go round :P
Pure
Brilliantness

After my beautiful Welsh tea boy is gone, I won't ever watch Torchwood again. And the thing is, I actually mean that. No more "IM MEVER WATCHING YOU AGAIN!" And then crawling back weeks later. I'm done. If someone offered me several million dollars, I might watch a quarter of an episode. But I can't handle life without my beautiful tea boy.

wonderful,and heartbreaking,BUT at least they are together again...!

omg, great story, glad for one where ianto lives, sorry i didnt review for all the chapters, my internet has a habit of crashing right in the middle of something important, wanted to read the story before it did, enjoyed the story very much, had me crying, laughing, squealing and more, thanks for a great read :), too bad they didnt use this version instead, and i would still watch season 4 without ianto, too addicted to not, but would spend the whole time complaining about gwen and lack of ianto :)

Just started reading this and am enjoying it a lot. I did see one thing that needs fixing in this chapter:

“Hmm...psychotically induced symptoms?” proposed the doctor.

I think you meant 'psychosomatically' induced. There's quite a difference in meaning between the two words.

First, Happy belated Birthday. Second, I really like your ending better. Great Story, Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading more Janto stories from you.

Amazing! Way better than the last two episodes of the season 3 mini-series.

Hehe.. part of the dreams sounds kinda like something I was planing to do in one of my stories ( don't worry, it's not even close to what you wrote, it just reminded me of it).

Great story so far. Just like Jack, I really like the sound of the TARDIS appearing, the sound is interesting.

I just noticed that as I was reading this, coincidentaly I was listening to 'The Ballard of Ianto Jones', making it seem like I was actually watching the moment on tv instead of reading it. Wow, listening to that makes the scene much more emotional.

I like the epilogue. Having Jack leave the planet with Ianto makes it all ok. He's...they'll...still be heros and fighting for what is right. They'll just be doing it on a different scale. Now that they're both imortal, Earth seems a bit too small and limited for what they can accomplish.

Thanks for writing this piece. It was quite good, and a pleasure to read...

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