Thank you for a great story.

YOu know, Sirus really could just leave, I mean, nothing is there to stop him when you think about it. He could easily go to a country that could give a shit less about Britain. This part annoyed me really, you're just looking for a reason to force Harry back and not really thinking about plot.

Nine years - I guess I won't find out how old Mortie buys the big one.
Good story, though.

I just wanted to let you know that I enjoy your writing very much. You are very talented. I actually have a hard time reading some of this chapter, simply because you do such an excellent job conveying emotions that I find myself pacing angrily. Thank you for sharing.

well its a shame this has been abandoned it was a very good read i just wish it would of been finished

This is great extremely well written in my opinion and I hope you continue it.

Great story. But the role of Hermione looks to be forced into your story. It's about Harry and Gabrielle, not? To me it's more about Harry and Hermione, and some with Gabrielle as afterthought.

Decent story. Wish Hermione was the dead one to be honest. Shes been too much of a focal point where logically she shouldnt be. I've noticed a lot of writers who for example like to ship H/Hr and write stories based around another ship like Gabbi or Daphne they tend to make Hermione more important to the story than she should be. To me it feels like shes forced on us from the start. Yeah she supported Harry during triwiz and so on but she went against her beliefs when Harry was talking about the marriage contracts and her mother was used as the Barbaric scapegoat. If you ever finish this and it end up with her joining Harry and Gabi i'll be happy to email a bitch slap.
Other than the Authors Hermione fetish the story is great, Love the way you have Harry and Gabbi growing together. there have been a few moments where it feels like the plot is dragging on but overall a god read hop you finish it up

Hope you decide to continue this story at some point, a wonderful read.

Obviously you wrote this 8 years ago, but I just wanted to thank you and tell you how much I appreciate you sharing it with us. I discovered this yesterday, read the entire thing, loved it. You've given us all a great gift. Thank you.

I would honestly like to know how that conversation ended 50 years in the future, dear, but even though I had been proclaiming my love for you repeatedly before getting married, I actually didn't really start loving you until after we slept together"

very good, really like the story, hope you're still updating

Aye Blinkin! Abe Lincoln? Where?!

Hope you come back to this I quite like it.

Yeah real smart just allowing others to look at your personal bank details. Also Hermione holding out her hand demanding it being given to her to read. Bit presumptive.