Quietly reading until I came across your quote, I cant help but to point out that using the term Eskimo is derogatory much in the way calling an Asian oriental is.

OMG, two days, I finish the story in 2 freaking days
I'm losing my mind, I really love them, I want to very I don't know why but I will really cry. Btw, Now I'm going to the third part.
This was absolutely fabulous, I mean, Kaede betrayed them, Miroku and Rin dating, OMG! I think that was thr best part or all. Love it.

it's like inuyasha and kouga fighting for who gets kagome all over again except it's the stick-up-the-but version. and this fact had me rolling

This has been a fabulous series, and i kind if wish it would be considered canon, with the prince and the king and everything.

love it!

aww I was looking forward to their first time together especially because it wok be kagome's first time...I could imagine her reaction to the sting of the first time and her cussing while Byakuya just kind of laughs before the tango really started hehe he...lol wish you'd come back and write a oneshots about their first time together.

oh my gosh! where's the rest of those lemons!

I truly enjoyed this story though something kept jarring me when Kagome would think about wanting peace you would spell it piece like a piece of pie instead of peace like Peace on Earth Sorry I am normally not nitpicky about spellings but that kind of jarred me out of the story though it gave me a little giggle when it happened. Heaven knows I have a hard time with Lose and Loose and breath and breathe. anyway I am looking forward to the next part. I am glad that he finally loosened up and gave Kagome a big kiss at their wedding. : ) twas sweet.

-squee-

LMAO 'the waters too expensive '

See I thought I had read this before and that explains why I couldn't claim veil of flesh as my name too! NOw what email did I use for that name!

Her punching him made me squee, I love it!

Yay! I am actually so happy when I found out that not only did you make a sequel but you made a sequel to the sequel!

Gah! Kagome punched Sestran! Like Wham! :O I half yelled and half laughed, making my sister regard me with a strange look. xD Haha Kagome, you're lucky he's taken a liking to you. :3

I don't know what I was expecting from this fic. I'm not sure how I feel about it since I really liked the first one. I suppose I was expecting something different and I was a bit disappointed after I finished reading it. But that's not your fault it's my own because I just had different expectations for this story. Still think the love story is the best thing about your Tale of Two Souls series. Because I was a bit disappointed with the route this story took I don't really know if I'll read the the third part of your series. Not to say your a bad writer or anything or that your story is bad because it isn't. It just isn't really my cup of tea. Still good job on the characterization of Kagome and Byakuya, I still think some of the other characters are OOC, but I was really impressed with Byakuya's evolution from the star of the first part of your series to the ending of this one.

i loved this chapter it so awesome