I love bittersweet, heartwarming and stories that bring me to tears. Just like this one, da?

Omigawd. :

I can't stop crying ;-;

This was perfect, lovit!

Awesome job!

You did a fantastic job!

Aw, Liet singing to Russia is so adorable. I never knew there was more to the song than that one verse, but all of it fits them. Oh, and I loved the verse you made up. I can totally imagine Russia singing something along those lines. :)

Very nice work!

-Necury

wah~~

i very much like this fic. :3 especially ivan's fragile innocence... ah, and the ending verse you wrote fit along wonderfully. it's a lovely fic.

~Pizzazz

Uwahh ;-; h-how sad! Lithuania, be one with Russia again~

As for the last verse, it actually did stand out a bit when I was humming it. some of the syllables don't match up. It still sounds okay when singing it, except the third line

we'll stay forever

in the sunshine

I think that second bit needs another syllable? but lyrically it fits in perfectly, very well done.

(Ah, wouldn't it be amazing if Russia's voice actor sang this?)

Woah, you wrote those last lyrics? They were awesome, fit right in, I thought they were actually part of the song :D I really loved this, it's awesome. And well, I've always loved this song C: The only suggestion I would make would be to have the lines not centered. The lyrics are fine that way, I just think the story parts should be on the left. My eyes got used to it tho _

I really loved this, especially the ending, although it made me sad. I hope to see more writing from you!