| Reviews for SG7 |
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   pmauchline chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 I want to add my oc Name: Kit Type:Wolf Eye color: Acid green After his first time completely pissed his one eye turned black with a red iris and pupil Fur color: Blood Red Accent: Scottish Wears leather jacket ripped jeans and carries grenade launcher shield and a haunted sword |
| Handepsilon chapter 12 . 11/21/2011 Good one! Looking forward to see more! |
| Hokuto Ulrik chapter 12 . 11/19/2011 Nah, it more of I have a lot on my plate at the moment. But either way this chapter turned out really well, despite being shorter than usual. |
| Handepsilon chapter 11 . 6/19/2011 LOL! My stomach hurts! |
| Prototron MJ Tornada chapter 3 . 5/20/2011 Is it too late to get in? Cause if not... Twilight Orchid a hedgehog black furred with purple strips on her arms and head. She can summon weapons but only if she knows how the weapon is made and how it works. Twilight is a female. I don't think that's to godlike is it? Almost forgot Twilight was born on Mobius |
| Handepsilon chapter 10 . 3/23/2011 What the...! |
| Tyranifex chapter 6 . 11/23/2010 great story, is the new character thing still open because I have an OC you could use, please respond |
| Champ11 chapter 2 . 10/5/2010 So far, it's okay. One serious spelling error that was just glaring to me was that you used Coronal (I think it has something to do with a part of the eye) instead of Colonel (US Army/Air Force/Marine rank that has the designation of O-6, an O-5 if you place a Lieutenant in front). Biggest reason that was glaring to me is that I serve in the US Army ROTC program, and my CO is a Lieutenant Colonel. Other than that, not too bad for a fanfic. I keep getting a slight feeling that COL O'Neill (Which is how you correctly spell the name) is OOC. He just doesn't strike me as sarcastic enough. |
| RazielX chapter 10 . 10/2/2010 this is a really good story. one of the best ive read in a while. |
| Blodh Skolir chapter 9 . 9/6/2010 Nice story, I especially think that the way you liked it to Ulrik's story (or vice versa) is clever. My main question is; when are ya bringing in the bad guys? |
| Leeton Osaki chapter 8 . 2/17/2010 Extremly good story but could do with more of Col Jack O'neal in his mobius form. |
| Sydonai chapter 2 . 12/7/2009 You realize that Earth is Mobius right, or should I say; Mobius used to be Earth, before the Xarda gene-bombed it. |
| Hokuto Ulrik chapter 7 . 11/3/2009 Excellent chapter man. Looks like both Kerra and Melissa have basically the same background. |
| Hokuto Ulrik chapter 6 . 9/19/2009 LOLZ! |
| bh18 chapter 5 . 9/15/2009 Hey you might want to reupload chapter six, I got an alert about it and it says error when i clicked the link. Something about a faulty URL. |
