Reviews for Tourist Trap
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
That was so hot! I love the pairing Naruto/Itachi! I love bottom Itachi! Itachi is my favorite character! I loved this story so much!
Soul Vrazy chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
OMG THAT REALLY HOT! Kyaaaa! Totally cool NAruto! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I WANT MORE!
Kazan Funka chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Totally love this! I love a dominant Naruto and for some reason it works so well with Itachi. You did a really good job with this! Thanks for taking the time to write this!
MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
interesting!
Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I liked it..I did. The only thing I could have done without was the astrics that showed the actions. That could have been avoided and it would have been better. I loved the lemon though! _ Very nicely written! And I didn't expect them to know each other and actually be together at the end! Nicely done!
Ninja-Fox-Lover chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
awsome awsome!

pure goodness-WAIT

PURE AWSOMELY AWSOMENES!

SUCH HARD YAOI...I LOVD IT XD
Kataru chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
Thank you for ukeItachi... My heart has been pierced with loads of knifes from the tons of itanaru around... your story help cure it. UkeItachi is always the sexiest... yayyayyay~ T_T
Crazy PurpleSage chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Ha! I love Sasuke in this. Hilarious! Especially the 'duck bum' hairstyle and his mutterings at the end. XD Poor Sasuke.

What did Itachi and Sasuke really do for the man anyway? Anyone could have told the dude that. Man, I need to get into a profession like that, eh? lol

But you did it again. I kinda read the summary, but I didn't get it 'til the very end and not because you said it, but because I put the pieces together that they were already 'together'. I understand subtelty and not beating a dead horse for the reader, but I think some things do need to be showed or told more clearly. Especially because the way you describe the scene where the see each other as if it really is their first meeting.

And the weird friends in college comment I'm not sure I understood at all. Who had the weird friends? Sasuke or Itachi? And who are you referring to? Naruto?

Still, another great story! :D

Unfortunatley, I have to go back to studying now. :( I'm sure I'll read more before the night's up, though.
Itanaru101 chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
U RULE IN WRITIN' ITANARU!
Hiromi Not To Shabby chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
I Love This Story Especially Because Naruto Is The Seme! xD

Great Job!

Ja Ne!
antidegenerate chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
mm itachi uke was delicious.. i love the naruita pairing :D

great job~
The Riddle Heir chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
absolutely loved it!
Ruka-x3 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
This story was HOT! I love me some hot ItaNaru x]
Schwarz Stein chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I mean no offense when I write this. However, when I began to read this, I thought it would be alright. As I continued though, I had to stop... there is only a lot I can take before I can stop and this really takes the cake. For instance the little inputs "devilishly handsome older brother Itachi" "Which leads us back to why the two outrageously attractive males" "unaffected by the lustful stares" These are really unnecessary. It only adds to heavy blown exaggerated effect. It's true that this is the world of fiction and authors have the right to publish whatever they want. But also do please pay in mind that there will be readers who would want to picture the whole scenario. Read something that would put images into their head. By adding those inputs, not only are you sullying readers, but you also put biased opinions. Anyways, I'll stop now. I mean no offense just giving a tiny criticism. The story would be good without the remarks.
DeviWan chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Hahahaha...

lol, crossed eye imperfection, that was so hilarious.

Oh yeah, major hotness!

This pairing so so very rare!

I love an ukeItachi.

Hope you write more with Itachi as uke!

Great job!
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