Oh, wow. Um, yeah. He gave her her answer, all right, and she's about to open a whole new chapter of questions... and choices.

Well done; I liked this, the darker Marshall, the confrontation that's been a long time in coming. Good job.

Great story.

and dont we wish this happened.

hugs

I really liked this story! I think that it be a great follow-up to the eppy of Mary's little office engagement party or the one where Marshall is playing chess online with a Pakstani girl and he's drunk. Either way, I thought that it fit into the characters and the season very well.

:D Amazing! I absolutely love your Marshall (in case you didn't know that lol)

Oh, I think this is one of my favorite views on how they get together. Very well done.

:)

Ahh, I do hope something like this happens in the show.

Dam! I freaking loved it. :D

Oh wow! What a terrific story! Sexy and powerful! I wish there was more.

That had to be one of the best Mary/Marshall fanfics I have ever read. XD

It was great, and you captured Mary's personality perfectly. Even Marshall's personality, even though he was drunk!

It was a great fic.

Last night's episode was so like this story! Marshall is so not happy and Mary catching whiff of it! Hopefully the show will turn out like this story. Thank you for sharing.

Definitely how I wish the writers of the show would twist this sordid mess around. Not that I dislike Raph, but I hate Raph and Mary together and I think that Marshall really loves Mary if only she'd open her eyes and catch a clue.

yes! that little despite of comment bugged the hell out of me when i watched the epi. what's up with that... despite of...

anyway, thank for the alt. ending, it was much needed.

-cl

yay! Why couldn't the writers have done somehong like this?

Thanks for writing this! I was so ticked that Mary decided to marry Raph when all there relationship seems to be is sex and not anything deeper...