finally a entourage story with an oc for vince it's what i ve been waiting for i was soooo excited when i found this you have no idea you have to start updating soon please please i love vince in this and the guys are exactly how they are in the show i love peyton as a girlfriend for vince altho the whole ari thing was shaddy on her part and i hope it doesnt happen again. and im hoping peyton will warm up a little i mean their is a fine line between being protective of yourself and being just plain cold hearted so far shes on the protective side but shes coimmg close to the cold hearted but like i said i hope thats all over now and she sees what a genuine guy vince is and how he really doe care about her ...but please start udating again xxx

Just starting reading this! I love it!

Kick his ass Vince!

I NEED MORE! Totally cliff hanger! Not fair! Love that they're together and I love that he made her call him boyfriend. Now I want him to call her girlfriend and to commit! Lord that would be heavenly. But seriously, you must must MUST update soon. You're killing me here with this ending! Please post soon!

xoxox Ash

They meet again...

Great chapter! Her response is very dead pan, very suiting to her character. Can't wait to see what comes next. Please please please update soon!

Aww! This was so cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG! I love this chapter! You're killing me here! Peyton should be with Vince! Why is she so damn stubborn? I love how Vince keeps getting more and more romantic as the chapters go on. I secretly have always fancied him to be a romantic... just needed to find the right girl. God this chapter could not have come at a better time. I was nearly bored OUT of my mind when ding! I had an email from your story! I think it was sent personally to entertain me but now I feel spoiled and want more! Be brilliant and lovely and update! Please post another chapter soon. I'm dying to see what happens next!

xoxox Ash

Wow this story is sad. It's unconventional, but I'd love to see how it turns out.

No! I hate cliff hangers! I'm so glad you updated. Great story and I can't wait for more. I so want Peyton and Vince to be together. I can't wait! Please update soon! The wait will kill me!

xoxo Ash

Great story! Are you planning on updating it? I look forward to more... Please update soon!

I really liked this! You've really gotten the characters down right and it made a joy to read! I hope you update this soon! It's fantastic!

While I had my initial doubts about yours being the only OC story in the Entourage sector, I was impressed. Your writing is realistic, and you speak through the original characters flawlessly.

Peyton seemed a bit unbelievable, but I'm guessing you loosely based her characteristics on some of your own, which is fine. All in all, I enjoyed the grounded conclusion; it fit her personality, and it seemed only fitting that the two wouldn't settle on a societal norm's definition of a relationship.

Very-well written, I look forward to reading more of your material

This is an awesome story. Payton seems to have so many tricks up her sleeve that Vince just can't keep up, not that she tries anyway.

I'm still enjoying your story. I look forward to a new chapter.

I think Peyton's age could have been part of the age, but with the way you write her character, I am no longer picturing her as a nineteen-year-old. In my mind she's at least twenty-one, what with her buying two six packs at the grocery store (of course she may have not been carded) and clubbing. While I'm sure there are some 18 clubs in LA, I'm also sure there are 21 clubs and I don't know, that's just how I picture her. Obviously, she's your character, but I don't see her as nineteen.

Anyway, moving on. I know I'm your only reviewer, but I truly am enjoying this. Please update soon.