| Reviews for New New Moon |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 2/16 the paragraphs are wayyyy to chunky. split them up pls |
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/7/2018 that vulgar threat was funny...Input: crucifix,Output:Holy water :):) |
 whoshotthemoon chapter 23 . 2/22/2018 I like it better when all of them were wolfs |
| whoshotthemoon chapter 18 . 2/22/2018 Its sound so unrealistic. This whole "pack" looks to me like "gang" of schoolboys. Dont buy the idea but im gonna keep reading. No flames really, i like your writing and the fact that there is a plot, good it even make sense? |
| whoshotthemoon chapter 16 . 2/22/2018 Okay, I dont like this plot with the pack but im gonna keep reading |
| whoshotthemoon chapter 10 . 2/22/2018 Okaaay. I know this is for your plot for them to stay at Maca place but its a bit unbelieveable. The course was arranging them places to stay so they should arrange them different place. Its logical |
| whoshotthemoon chapter 4 . 2/21/2018 There is one thing I dont get - is it common in America to talk about your sex life with your parents? Come on... she shouldve just said theyre dating, im sure Charlie would assume theyre having sex. Like every healthy relationship. Why did she have to confess everything? |
| Ariana Peverell chapter 14 . 12/8/2015 I like the relationship development between Jake and Bella. |
| Ariana Peverell chapter 11 . 12/2/2015 Fluffy! |
| Ariana Peverell chapter 7 . 12/2/2015 Wonder what. Mac's up to |
| Ariana Peverell chapter 6 . 12/2/2015 Down with emo Bella! |
| Ariana Peverell chapter 4 . 12/2/2015 Woah... Bella is actually talking to Charlie about Edward... that's never happened before... |
| Xemnas4 chapter 28 . 8/6/2015 Shit. Forget awesome, this Bella is BADASS! XD |
| Xemnas4 chapter 24 . 8/6/2015 Damn! This Bella is AWESOME. XD Loving this. Meyer would have a heart attack if she read this stuff. Lol. |
| Xemnas4 chapter 13 . 8/5/2015 Its official, I like Nickey. He's awesome. XD |
