Reviews for Free My Soul
A Little Someone chapter 12 . 4/14
So I remember reading this but... the memory is really vague?! Like the words never sunk in properly!? If that makes sense. But geez louise! What the is right! Hahaha I very much enjoyed the first instalment and the ending to this is... sweet... bittersweet? I’m just sad they’ve gotta start from square one again lol but still a good read!

Don’t mind me as I go through your stories again!
ambrosicl chapter 12 . 1/19
Ok so it's been 10 years since you wrote this and I am crying I need a part three, this story was so good, it was hot and adorable all at the same time, I am at a loss for words.
Lisaxalaya chapter 12 . 10/8/2019
I just finished this second part of your story and even though my english is really horrible I just have to review this FF...
I simply love your style of writing. The way you keep everybody in character (especially Vegeta) and still make them your own characters is outstanding. In the end of the story I really had tears running down my face... please never stop writing.
Daisy chapter 12 . 9/3/2019
You convey deep emotion in a few words. This is great. Vegeta was both a prisoner and a ruler, and his character never changes. Bulma too, remains true to her core canonical characterization. She feels fear but acts despite the fear. This is more difficult than if she was simply fearless. I don’t know what you planned to do situation-wise for the third part, or if a third part is even coming, but it would’ve been interesting to see how the characters would’ve grown because of their changed situations.
MrsVegeta28 chapter 1 . 7/1/2019
I absolutely enjoyed this master piece! It’s unlike any of other of the Bulma/Vegeta fics out there. I know it’s been nearly 10 years and I’m going to scroll through again but I hope there’s a third instalment!
kyrarihanna chapter 12 . 7/1/2019
wow the turn of events though..I mean, we expecting bulma success in revive Earth and humans but...woah..and the last chapter make us want more..is there any sequel/part 3 for this story?
lyss58 chapter 12 . 11/27/2018
I don’t normally review stories that have been finished for almost two decades, but this one more than earned it. The detail and emotion in this story is something most writers strive to achieve and still fall short of. You kept them in character and yet made them your own at the same time. This was raw and the dialogue was real and deep. You didn’t throw out big words for the sake of sounding like an intelligent writer. Everything was planned out and executed exactly the way you meant it. My favorite scene was with Vegeta and Guru, their exchange was like a work of art lol. I sincerely hope your still writing. It would be a crying shame if not.
The Great and Powerful Panda chapter 12 . 9/7/2018
While I really like this story and I hope one day you'd deside to write a part 3 I have two problems. First the OC daughter was weird. Why didn't you just use Trunks? He's they're cannon child. Second the Vegeta at the end was WAY too ooc. He's dialogue was unintentionally comical.
lacklusters chapter 6 . 3/13/2018
this is so good !
Kitty in the Box chapter 12 . 5/6/2017
rest assured i wont be WTFing this. i stayed the course and i am absolutely thrilled and satisfied with the way you ended this. thank you. thank you. you are a wonderment. you are one of the best writers i have the pleasure to read from. you wrote another masterpiece.
SarahEMC chapter 12 . 3/1/2017
omg great story! I loved all of it!
R.S.L chapter 12 . 2/24/2017
T-T poor bunny..
nina chapter 12 . 11/21/2016
he leído esta historia mas de 15 veces y aun espero la continuación, espero que el autor algún día termine lo que sería una buena triologia
peggica chapter 12 . 10/28/2016
This is one of the best VegeBul stories I have read, please please pleeasee write the 3rd! :O :)))
MarcellaDuchamp chapter 12 . 9/20/2016
I just read this for the third time - still amazing! Your A/N teaser ideas for a part three sounds so good, and I desperately hope that one day you write it.
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