wtf... how can u just end it like that

Thank you for pointing it out. One of the most popular couples and nobody can write some decent fanfic about it. I can't comment on every single story that it sucks because I think I would get my pm box blown up with stupid replies. People keep using clichés and only now is the population of mindless fangirls starting to invite a brain to inhabit them. Thankyou for helping thousands of people understand this.

Hahahahahahah! I loved this! :D first time I've read a story that that author barges in and trashes the entire story. You should do this more often. :)

I learned that you don't respect peoples tastes, and if your going to be mean to the people who do like this you should at least make another one maybe have them not be vampires and whatever emotions you want them to have to make it up to the people who like the natsumeXmikan couple

hahaha this is one of the most awesome ripoff ever! atleast their love story wasn't expressed entirely in stares and natsume didn't sparkle in the fucking sunlight like a fucking goddamn tinkerbell. still a better love story than twilight :))))))

Since I'm too lazy to login in ill write it here. I have to give it up to you. I have read thousand (literally) fanfics and they always end in a predictable ending and most of the times they annoy me.
Your story from the start I though was quite weird beacouse Hotaru personality did not match up to her real one nor did natsume or any one of your characters.
Since I also write I thought that you would clear up all the holes as the story advanced but hands down that was an EPIC FINAL I love it and I'm sooo putting you on my favorities.
Thanks for giving me something worth reading (your end) and you have became one of my fav authors!

:Ooh... that was a really fast ending but it was okay

Cool!

Yes i've sometimes wondered as well why good stories get the least reviews.

Keep it up!

Riverflute

Uh, some of the stuff in this chapter made absolutely no sense. If Natsumes some creep who's drinking blood from some random girl, why would he suddenly care about what happens to her out of no where? And in case you didn't notice hotaru was right there when Milan claimed to have stayed over at her house, and obviously knew she was lying, so why was her story bought so easily? No this isn't a flame, just constructive criticism. Just read through your chapters again and think about what your writing before posting.

Hahahaha oh my god. I kept reading this because I figured you would explain some of the holes in the story but I most certainly did not expect THAT. I was. laughing my ass off. I'm putting this story on my favorites list just because of the end.

Btw, I think people put 'orbs' because they're trying to be poetic and/or eloquent.

And I call the twilight vampires (use a super-gay voice) 'sparkly bloodthirsty fairies that live in the forest'... Though however much I bash on that series, it was an original take on the vampire approach (even though the plot was repetative, like a little kids tv show).

Haha! I just love how you ended the story! To me it was so funny and kinda true. I was starting to get bored with the story so was I was gonna quit but then I realized I was on the last chapter and so I was like what the heck and read it. Haha nice work.

Just a head's up... I will steal your idea on Mikan being so Tomboyish to the point of putting her in the Boy's dorm. Maybe add fantasy to it. But I agree, Vamp fics are too much now... so, can you check out one of my old fics? some say it's unique. Just please don't steal it :... you can flame it though... (and well I forgot my password and my internet is crap right now so I can't go OL to my email to retrieve my PW) the story is Cards by sEcretmiNdLoLITA ... Thanks :)

I was quite happy with the story until you ruined it so...(sarcastically) THANKS A LOT! (Sarcasm ends.) I wish you had continued it and had done it like "Tired."

I, hands down, did not expect that. As it was pointed out by others, the story was rather interesting in an...errrr...unique way. Your rant was so amusing :b So, thanks, FearandloathingXIX, for opening my eyes and making me realize that the world of fandom needs fresh, new ideas. ((:

i like it _