Reviews for Discontent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Coming back into fandom. I'd forgotten how much I love this fic. So perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful plot, hope there will be more of it soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet and bitter-sad. Thanks for writing. I wonder what Riddick is up to? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simon was kinda a jackass here, at certain points. And did the kid stop crying when Riddick held him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite enjoyed this and thought it was really well done. For being a one-shot you managed to give the characters a natural feel without having to explain about them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man this was... wow just wow. You totally captured all of the voices here. How had I never even considered this crossover anyway? Just...man.. intense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How adorable! I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() River was so awesome in this fic. I loved her commentary to her son when Rissick named him. Thanks for posting. -Ellie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. Just discovering this River/Riddick crossover stuff. "Interesting" as in, you move past the previous 'action' and just take a moment and crystallize it. "Interesting" as in Riddick's often quoted line. :) About the only thing missing is the swearing in Chinese. ;) You capture the characters well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good, a little confusing, and I wanted something horrible to happen to Simon for trying to take a newborn away from it's mother but overall I really liked it. I love the River/Riddick pairing and have tried to find more of them on , but there is a sad lack of them. keep up the great work and please feel free to do more of this pairing in the future! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should right more. I enjoyed this. Love the river/riddick pairing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely story. I like the dynamic you set up between the characters. Winter seems to be a perfect name for Riddick and River's son. Great job. Will you be writing more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so good! I've been waiting for another Riddick/Firefly crossover for months and even though this is just a one shot it really captured everything really well! Great job with the River-speak, very her, especially the part where you make her go off on a poetical tangent and end with teaching how to kill with the brain, very nice. All in all, very very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this pairing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it. you have no idea how much i love this pairing. i just glad that i am not the only one who loves them together. i would love to read how they came to be together but even if you don't do more i am just glad to have this. the story is one of my favorites now. |