Amazing writing. Such a great, sadistic story. I, like you, am a fan of hurt!Dean more than hurt!Sam, but other than that, I loved it. Your writting technique is truly wonderful and the fic is both intriguing and sad with equal parts fear.

Utterly sick to my stomack that's how I feel about what John did ! I don't care if this is a work of fiction or not that was crossing the line !

U mean this wasn't intense enough ! God that was so sadistic & Evil physically as well as emotionally ! Thus us only fiction but knowing brutal things like this actually go on I don't know if I can go on reading this ! Doesn't anybody see the bruises or the pain in their Eyes crying out for help ! I'm practically crying my Heart Out !

OMG ! That. Was so brutal & Horrific ! What kind of a man could b so cruel to their own child ! I hate John in this A U Iwant to see him get torn apart limb by limb so he can feel pain like poor little Sammy feels . please tell me it gets ts better soon I don't think my heart can handle it ! Yourwriting is very good thou iI hope your. Other stories aren't as dismal !

Noooooo

What a sick twisted piece of shit your version of John is in this!He'd have a terrible accident if it were up to me, falling downstairs while drunk, or burned to death in bed, I'm sure the boys could think of something good?

I don't want to suggest ways of hurting Dean. No, I want to see John come up against another full grown man, who kicks the crap out of HIM!

NO JOHN YOU SON OF A BITCH

You're killing me with these chapters I swear I'm gonna have an aneurism

Atta boy Dean get the hell outa that house.

Have I mentioned how well you've captured Dean? His thought processes, his movements, his language, it all screams Dean.

I just died this is so adorable oh my poor poor boys oh my gosh feels

Omg I love you, please get our boys out of there. I don't think I could handle this anymore.

Hel yes

So dam has talked

Oh cape

Picturing Adam as a six year old so vulnerable nearly broke my heart. And I really want to strangle John right now. I love the Dean hurt parts, and all the brotherly love between the trio. And now, I'm off to read your sequal! :-)