I always been a huge fan of Jacob and Hermione together as a couple
get chapter pls update soon

I can't wait for the next chapter coming up love it

this is good you should continue

yay jacob and hermione are together :)

it was just superb. i totally loved it and i am kinda hoping that leah will imprint on george... i hope you update soon.

keep going this is really good so far

i love it plz continue soon!

when next chapter? )

Sounds great so far :-) A few things I'd like to point out, though:

1) "The final battle had ended but without lots of death." If you look closely, that means that the war didn't have lots of death. I think you meant "but not without lots of death."

2) When switching from person to person in dialogue, you should have each person's set of dialogue on a separate line. I.e.

*

"Hey, Bob!" Jill shouted.

"Shut up. I hate you," Bob muttered, and turned away.

"Fine, be that way," said Jill, and flipped Bob the bird.

*

3) Uhm... I forgot. Well, on to the next chapter for me!

You know, other people have told you so; your story is interesting and stuff, but you need to put the sentences into order and have the verbs into the correct form every time-and sometimes you even forget them!And the dialogues are totally messed up. But as I said the plot has a lot of potential. Maybe you should use a "treasure" programm.

update soon

Good chapter, Update soon please.

lately I've taken up the persoinel challenge of finding a twilight fanfic thats written well, but so far its not working for me and your story is not the exception to the rule.

Great Story Update soon please

Like it updtae soon.