This is great! It’s so sad though, which so good so keep it up, I couldn’t control some of the tears flowing. They just had to come down !

Aaahhh~ I know it's been almost a decade since you've finished this but I only just found it. And I'm so glad I did! You've done such a wonderful job! I'm sure you'll probably never read this because it has been so long, but I just have to tell you anyway~ I think you've captured all of them perfectly! I don't think I could have asked for a better read or such a glimpse into Alice's mind, even from Meyer herself! This feels like it could be seamlessly included in her series, though it is very clearly yours and your writing style. I especially love how you depicted Alice falling into some of her visions, particularly the ones she isn't looking/prepared for. How certain words of those around her (or thoughts of her own) start to drop her into them; blurring present and future for a moment of disorientation. It was an amazing visual and gave me a great sense of foreboding/unease/slight discomfort that I can (now) imagine Alice experiences. I can't help but picture that scene from Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, just after Fred and George completely disrupt everyone's exams with fireworks in the halls, where amidst everyone cheering and having a good time, Harry's reality is melting around him until he sees that vision of Sirius being tortured by Voldemort. Absolutely awesome! I do very much feel like you really /got/ her. Truly, well done; an absolutely fantastic job! A million thanks for sharing this with us!

Tbh, Alice is badass for going against everyone to search for Bella. She's truly a loyal, concerned friend.

I know it's 2019 and this was posted years ago, but if you're still out there: this was wonderful! It was beautifully written, the Alice/Jasper moments were perfect! Exceptional writing!

Amazing

best story i have ever read! this genre is sooooooooooooo freaking good! love this story are you planning for eclipse too? please do it would have been epic

I give you review-no jacob pls

*cries because of the feels*

i dont mind LONG pointless chapters

You are a great author... you should make a Rosalie version of New Moon

#cliffhanger but whatvevs...I do t care , read all watched all.. Kaylen m a total

You are Asome! I Twilight.. and vampires, including Alice. Discovering this book made me SO giddy! Write more, please!

It's really great you should keep writing like this

So damn good. I have to check myself because I get so eager for more of your words that I crash through the sentences wanting more more more now! Then I have to force myself to go back and read more slowly so I can soak it all up. I don't want to miss a single word. Effing brilliant.

Omg. ::tears pouring:: this is perfect.