Wait, WHAT? She's stronger than Sasuke? That sucks... I mean, YOU SUCK SASUKE! Nah... :D good job wit da story, it's cool:D

Wow I love this story soo much. Narusaku is my favorite but shikamaru has always been my favorite single character and in narusaku stories he always seems like the big brother to push thing on and I love how involved he is in the story keep it up great story

You know I could have sworn this was a Naruto and Sakura story. Not a Kairi and the rest of the peons story. Was it really necessary to put an OC into a Naruto/Sakura story and turn her into a Mary Sue? Your just asking for people to dump your story as a result of it.

I like my Naruto/Sakura stories to actually be about Naruto and Sakura. And not turn them into some secondary characters so you can flaunt your overpowered OC in our faces. Well you lost this reader as a result, since I have no desire to read about your Mary Sue. Good luck though.

Haha! That was an awesome read. Quite intertaining, keep up the good work :)

That was actually quite good :)

Nice chapter. I'm guessing Sakura is going to actually push Naruto to the breaking point, or say something that she is really going to regret.

loved that chapter and cant wait for six.

I'm being picky, but stick with Naruto's land terms instead of one's home country. Flat, nah you wouldn't hear that in Konoha. Apartment is correct. Keeping things close to canon terms will make your story top notch.

Plenty of drama. Interesting. What's next, Choji hooks up with Temari?

well that was good i really liked the way u had sakrua and ino talk like that lets see what happens next

I liked this chapter. It was pretty good. I cant wait to read the next one and find out what happens next. Update again as soon as you can.

Right, first and foremost ... most guys do not talk like that about girls they like lol, except maybe Darren, I dunno, but none of the guys I know are that blunt, so may i advise a little, avoidance to speak on Shika's part?

Best of luck with the next chapter

Dave

Continue!

Right, your wish is my command miss kiko you get a review.

Well in premise its a good idea, can see it going well and obviously the pairing of Naurto and Sakura is of course a plus for me lol.

However, as you asked for an honest opinion, I do have to point out a few things.

Your spelling could use a bit of work, however, as you said your dyslexic I can't have to much of a go though I would advise a beta.

The way you wrote the speech, I'm sorry didn't sound like how most people talk, but it was okay, you're not trying to win best writer in the world, you just had the misfortune of asking me, a stickler for realism in speech lol.

I did like the characters, Naruto was bang on, Sakura was funny and a bit of a tease, very fitting lol, and Chouji and Ino were quite to character.

I specifically liked Ino's automatic reaction to blame Naruto haha.

Well I hope you can update this soon, i'll be waiting for it

TUI

This is a good story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever.