wish there had been more to this story but what there was was amazing, I'll definitly be looking out for more of your work and if you write more like this let me know!

How was Ginny able to just take off from school like that? Thank goodness this had the happy ending I was craving! :) Very sweet ending!

breif [brief]

recieved [received]

I thought Ron & Hermione were cute in this chapter, but I'm still sad for Harry & Ginny.

"This is why [you] can't be with you..." [I]

I'm so disappointed in Harry right now. Whatever's gotten into him?

Ooh, if Ron only knew what's really going on...he'd probably have a cow! lol I really liked the sweet ending! :)

Ooh, I really liked this chapter! Very steamy! With the 'untrained eye' comment, I thought, at first, that they were under Harry's invisibility cloak. I guess they were hidden behind a row of lockers?

'Harry pulled her hands hand out of his pants'

I really liked the intensity of the ending; especially Harry's parting, whispered words to Ginny. I hope he's beginning to realize he's addicted to Ginny, and not just the sex...

Good chapter with all the steaminess, but there are some parts that seem to be missing something, like something important was skipped over. (Specifically, when Ginny was outside relaxing & then all of a sudden Harry's there, and also when she shares her blanket with Harry - the first 'it' should probably restate 'her blanket'.)

'At the loss of contact as [she] finger came out of her...' [his?]

'Ginny pulled her skirt back [up]...' [Since they're making themselves presentable after their outside interlude, she'd be pulling her skirt back down, wouldn't she?]

A rather shocking story idea, but interesting! I liked the line: 'Ginny Weasley was Harry Potter's personal drug.' It just says it all, doesn't it? Nice job on this, and can't wait to see where this goes!

Great cap **

Update soon! I wonder if Harry and Ginny will get together.

ooh, i love how you finished the last chapter but it just wants to make me read further to finf out what happens next! please update!

Wow, this guy is so incredibly messed up! He rapes his girlfriend (it's not consensual and painful too) in order to warn her off of him. I hope she does stay away from him. Well, I hope she hexes his bits off and then stays away from him.

wow.

this chapter really changed my perspective of Harry, and how he treats Ginny...

I thought that he would at least tell her that he loved her BEFORE hurting her, but...I guess I was wrong.

I love Ginny though, because she's an exact mirror image of myself; as far as wanting to help people (with the addiction of sex)that can't really be helped, but you want to help them anyway.

I like this story.

I am so glad you updated, but this chapter was so sad. Not a fan of rape (obviously) but I understand why you wrote it. It conveyed his conflicting feelings and emotions. So sorry about your laptop, but I hope you update soon!