This is where you ended it? Left it? Oh man I would have loved to see more of this story. You had a nice foundation set up and it was getting more and more intense. I hope you come back to this someday or maybe right another story about all these characters. It was an enjoyable read.

Maleficent has been one of my favorite villains since I was a little girl. Though your original summary mentioned her I am still very excited to see what she is going to do in your story. I love your characterization of Yuffie by the way.

Wow Cloud making a move like that, that was refreshing. ;) Nice little chapter.

The fact that you have part of a song from Buffy's Once More with Feeling gets you huge bonus points with me. Buffy is my all time favorite show. Oh and Cloud needs to man up, he allows himself to get so weighed down with guilt which is very in character. Well done.

It has been hard to find a KH story that is pro Aerith/Cloud and I am excited to read this story. I like that he is thinking of everyone and that you allow all the characters to be important and influential to Cloud right away.

Great story so far. Please continued.

Whoa this is awesome! I love the story line! And you're great at writing Cloud! I can't wait for the nxt chap!

awesome story x love the storyline keep going

This is great so far. I can't wait until you update! Please update soon!

oh sorry for not posting a comment! I feel so bad! *cries* I WISH the chapter wasnt so short! makes me anxious for the next chapter! lol anyhoo plz keep up the good work! hope theres more clerith in it! :P .

oh plz continue! :D I like where this story is going! x3 x3 x3

I wonder how they will get riku and kairi! thats so puzzling but at the sametime interesting xD

I hope sora is all right! but then again sora isnt no pushover he can handle himself! xD

and yay for seeing more cloudxaerith fans I like clud and tifa as well but this couple just seems to make me grow soft all the time for some reason...lol

Aww no Tifa D:.

This is an amazing story and I cant wait to read more. It's very interestin. Keep up the good work and update asap

oooo!i'm cant wait to see another chapter of it!

oh!i'm looking forward to it!just love them to be together~~

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