Reviews for Breaking Through
Potter head 7530 chapter 3 . 5/30/2019
This is good
Potter head 7530 chapter 29 . 5/28/2019
Hey great story keep up the good work!
carligwilliams chapter 20 . 7/14/2017
I liked this chapter but me being the nerd I am must point out that Gamp's Law says that you cannot summon food out of thin air- meaning the room of requirement can't give it to you.
nayin1704 chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
Okay
LBII chapter 29 . 1/15/2016
Nice little story! Thank you for sharing your time, talents and imagination with us readers.
Stephanie O chapter 29 . 1/3/2013
Wow, those were some kisses! Finally! LOVE the idea of Harry's other gift for Ginny, with the juniper leaf! The carriages are pulled by thestrals, btw. I'll confess I'm a little confused by your class scheduling...DADA is a year-long class, as important as it is, and it seems like you've treated it as an elective?
Stephanie O chapter 28 . 1/3/2013
I can imagine the results of Harry in his new shirt - hot stuff! ;) lol
It's very cool that Harry figured out that Ginny made the Shepherd's pie, too. I like how you've been writing Fleur's accent...I think it's pretty appropriate most of the time. It does seem like Molly's running hot/cold when it comes to her previous obvious comments about Harry finding a wife and now her more subtle innuendos. There also appears to be an overabundance with the letter "K" in this as well, just saying.
Stephanie O chapter 27 . 1/3/2013
Sweet moment with Harry & Teddy, and Ginny with Teddy! :) Packing presents? Wrapping?
Stephanie O chapter 26 . 1/3/2013
Gee, that wasn't an obvious comment or anything...a WIFE?! Somehow I can't picture Molly saying something that obvious, but that's just me. Oh, and Molly is a "Mum", not "Mom".
Stephanie O chapter 24 . 1/3/2013
What happened to Madame Pomfrey saying she can 'heal broken arms in a trice' or something like that? I can't see why Ginny would need to stay in the hospital wing for two weeks recovering from her broken arm, since Harry was only in overnight when Lockhart removed his bones from his arm in 2nd year.
Stephanie O chapter 23 . 1/3/2013
Wow, so that's what Harry was doing in Knockturn Alley! I really liked Ginny's reaction to his tat...what a moment! :) About substitutes not being allowed in Quidditch, if that's true, then why are there Reserve members on the professional teams? That was very decent of Malfoy to offer to cut one of his chasers down to make it even...did they take him up on it?
Stephanie O chapter 22 . 1/3/2013
Wow, what a catch! I really liked how you wrote Harry after his spectacular save, still a bit shy, but reveling in the glory just the same. Loved the little bow and wink! ;)
Stephanie O chapter 21 . 1/3/2013
What happened with Andromeda? Good plan Ginny came up with to have her mum take care of Teddy...and I'm glad that the plan to get Ginny back on as Chaser worked out as hoped as well! Too bad Ron chose THAT moment to interfere...I hope something might've happened between H/G otherwise!
Stephanie O chapter 20 . 1/3/2013
LOVE the garden setting for their date...though I'd rather it was Harry who'd created it than Ernie! I'm glad that Ginny still rescued Harry from Romilda, though - that was very nice of her, as if she was vindictive enough she could've gotten back at him by leaving him in her clutches. Thank goodness she's not!
Stephanie O chapter 19 . 1/3/2013
As much as I don't like it, I do see where Ginny's coming from. She needs to stand up for herself, and has decided she's not going to let her life revolve around Harry anymore. I wonder if Hermione will now correct her advice she gave Harry about letting Ginny make the first move?
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