Reviews for Carnal Desires |
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Kmpcarter chapter 30 . 3/8 It really sucks to get into a story only to find it has no ending. |
YunaNara chapter 28 . 9/12/2019 awesome loved the whole story but where do u plan on posting your stories what site |
NUCGIRL72 chapter 30 . 11/8/2018 Update |
celajwhitney chapter 1 . 10/12/2017 where has this bella been hiding? |
flanduslover1 chapter 30 . 9/20/2017 Can't wait I love this |
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 18 . 5/22/2017 OMG Edward is a sick self loathing masochistic Psycho Lunatic..schizophrenic much |
angelaroberts202 chapter 8 . 3/16/2017 Lol you can't hide emotions from an empath. It's not like hiding emotions physically by looking nonchalant. You are always feeling something. |
angelaroberts202 chapter 1 . 3/16/2017 She could have just said she was thinking about Edward but was guilty about wanting to call him back because he needs to hunt and that would be selfish. |
kinnik chapter 5 . 1/11/2017 Lemon was great and I'm so excited they still have Saturday! |
kinnik chapter 1 . 1/11/2017 Love it already! |
jeoliverio chapter 29 . 11/28/2016 Read to chapter 29, I really hope that this story because I want to read the end? |
Michelle Law chapter 7 . 10/28/2016 Second in Command! that is PRICELESS. You should definitely copyright that phrase. Definitely a different take on the typical " Jasper/Bella-Jasper helps Bella recover from her shattered heart while she heals his inner "scars". " |
skyeza chapter 30 . 6/2/2016 WHAT? Please continue with this awesome story. I've really enjoyed it. |
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 30 . 2/21/2016 Great story, so far! Love it! Hope you get a chance to continue |
silversimon chapter 23 . 1/11/2015 So how many free shots does Assward get before he earns a butt kicking? That makes twice he's physically injured Bella because he cannot control his adolescent ass. He had his one "freebie ". His arms should remain removed until Bella's injuries heal. But no...the golden boy never deserves his just desserts ... poor Edward, my ass! Carlisle, as coven leader, should take him back to the woodshed. Esme should also act like a real parent since she wants to be a "mom " so badly. That job comes with obligations, not just fun. Lastly, Bella and Jasper are soul mates. Isn't it supposed to be nearly impossible to not claim one's mate? No guilt for Jasper or Bella, whereas Dumbward fooled around with Tanya for the hell of it. Not comparable situations. |