Reviews for Detention |
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quirkybread chapter 1 . 9/7/2014 Nice. :) pLz make a sequel! |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 3/28/2014 Awwww...! XDDD Hooo... High School Student Luffy is Cool and Adorable...! His interaction with Zoro was Great...! Nice! |
LunarStar98 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013 continuation?! please?! |
GreenCAT the second chapter 1 . 8/8/2012 aww,luffy is so cute :D |
SilverStream101 chapter 1 . 12/12/2009 Aah! So cool~ LOVE IT! Haha! It was funny and both Luffy and Zoro were in-character! *adds to favourites* |
softdreamer chapter 1 . 9/7/2009 nice fic loved it |
Lectori Salutem chapter 1 . 8/1/2009 That's really Luffy! He can be cool and sweet at the same time! And I like your Zoro too. He's grumpy alright, but I think that's how Zoro would act. I liked reading it, it was very nice! Good job! By the way, I'm guessing this is a oneshot, but would you consider continuing it? The last line makes me want to know how destiny is going to bring them together. Not that it would be hard, with Luffy's personality, but I'd still like to read it Your choice, though... |
SpringThunder chapter 1 . 8/1/2009 That's a pretty good story. I think this would be a great start for a collection of one-shots (if you have the time, that is) about the friendship between Luffy and Zoro (and whoever else you may want to bring into the fray). Nevertheless, enjoyed your little story here. Thanks for sharing. :D |