Idk if you still want to update this, but please know that this must be my most favorite POT fic. I love the way that this focused on Adventure and the development of characters. Even if I am initially lured by RyoSaku, I really love how you made things slow... building up the RyoSaku moments little by little really made me look forward to those moments.

It would be great if you could still update this. I really, really hope you do.

Idk if you still want to update this, but please know that this must be my most favorite POT fic. I love the way that this focused on Adventure and the development of characters. Even if I am initially lured by RyoSaku, I really love how you made things slow... building up the RyoSaku moments little by little really made me look forward to those moments.

It would be great if you could still update this. I really, really hope you do.

please continue this one.. I really love this story!

really awesome story.

So um uh...it's been a while...a LONG while...like long enough for me to have forgotten about this fic kind of long (and I DO NOT forget about fics I like, which is worrying because I REALLY like this one). So please. For only one update today, you can allay my fears of insanity.

A Fan

You just had to quit fanfiction when this story was getting really interesting, didn't you?

It sucks that you're putting your fanfiction to rest, Froggy. But I hope that you do feel inspired to write every once in a while, because your writing is fantastic. I'm positive you will be an awesome author for life, but in Fanfic, you will be sorely missed.

Ryoma's really selfish, isn't he?

I bet that Ryoma-kun might end up marrying a life size can of ponta one day. Poor Sakuno-chan...

conti, conti, conti, conti

This is absolutely awesome! It's like I'm actually watching a continuation of POT, minus all the glowing and super saiyan moves - well sure, there are still some skills here that would put ninjas to shame, but I'd prefer not to focus on those. It's also nice to see Sakuno take part in the action. This is definitely different to most of the RyoSaku(Ponta?) fics I've read before.
I absolutely loved the Ranma 1/2 parody. Asakura's pretty awesome too, I fell for her the moment she said 'Hakuna Matata'. Anyway, this is freaking hilarious - the fact that I read up to chapter 21 in one seating without noticing it is a testament to that.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

ehhhhhh?! nani?! UPDATE PLEASE!

KENICHI THE MIGHTIEST DISCIPLE?

"Genny is a tsundere." That is just beautiful. XD

I love this chapter too even if it didn't focus on Ryoma and Sakuno. I love how you're building a friendship between Genny and Asakura.

I won't pressure you to update, for I myself barely have time to update my own stories. Just know that I and others root for you to finish this. It really would be a waste not to.

This chapter is magnificent! Everything about it was beautiful and moving.

The whole story has great narrative and is engaging.

The characters, both canon and OCs are all very well-written.

I especially love the plot. All other R/S fics are about romance and the setting is the school or interactions outside the court. I love how you're taking it slow and building it so wonderfully and making realistically establish consciousness of each other in non-platonic ways. You're also giving focus to other characters.

It is such a delight to read this!

"People break up and have disagreements all the time or they just drift or something. That's just part of being human. If they were gonna disagree, they were gonna disagree, whether we were there or not. We're not doing anything bad; we're just catalysts. We're a force of nature."

Indeed, it's impressive that someone so dumb can say such interesting things. I recall reading that in a previous chapter. XD Nice OCs, seriously.