My reaction to the last chapter: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHH!

IS SHE DEAD?! YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING ME! IS SHE DEAD? TELL ME TOMINO'S GENES HAVEN'T INFECTED YA! IS SHE DEAD? I ASKED YOU A QUESTION!

Heh, heh, "Afro Samurai" reference, couldn't help it.

BTW, I said this before under the name "Dark Troo0per Phase 5," this is without a doubt the best 00 fanfic EVAH! It blows away canon (pun a little intended) right out of the cosmos.

Reasons
1. Superior character development and storytelling

2. New and very interesting OCs and Gundams

3. The feel and style of a Tom Clancy story. (Not that I've had much exposure to Tom Clancy works mind you)

4. Redemption and development of an underappreciated and eventually scrapped character.

Shame canon couldn't bring out its full potential, praise all gods above for fanfiction.

Still a good story, Nena is now hitting her stride as a full-fledged Celestial Being Gundam Meister and the final challenge is yet to come with Louise and I wonder if she's going to save a certain Asian liaison from death to see the Trailblazer story arc.

While it's been a while since I last read this, it's good that you've finally updated it - and I like seeing Nena-chan change for the better! I like her in this story! :D

This is Final Genesis, signing out!

Well, this is quite a pleasant surprise! Looking forward to read more of this in the future.

Almost two years! There is a God after all!

Way to follow up a weak chapter with a far stronger one, miragefla.

It remains generally interesting to see how your no-longer-psycho Nena interacts with each of the other characters.

Also, I see that the Wild Bear racked up quite a moment of awesome here, as he painfully reminded the Rising Phoenix that even with a Gundam on hand, they are anything but invincible. Not a bad touch at all, there.

About Alleleujah, you can add "and was tortured for the first year of said imprisonment." Fun bunch, those Feddies, though they thankfully grew out of such nastiness in the wake of Season Two thanks to the efforts of a certain trinity (no pun intended) of forces.

Good luck and Godspeed.

Aside from the usual GPS issues(and couple of near-homophone screwups), this isn't *bad* per se, though this was hardly your strongest chapter. My chief concern is Marie/Soma; unlike (H)Alleleujah(who effectively has two different people in one body), her personality 'modes' are basically two different aspects of the same person, just renamed (and apparently amnesiac) after the Institute fixed whatever the issue was that kept her all but comatose back then. Was this a deliberate change from the canon, or did you simply not know at the time?

I do like that you have Sergei getting more involved, however.

Good luck and Godspeed.

The logest and the best Gundam 00 fic I've ever read! These OCs, they are all high-quality and very deep. Hope you can finish this in a foreseeable future!

Just a friendly reminder. I and a lot of other fine men- and womenfolk are eagerly waiting for you to update.
Please don't drop off the face of the planet. I'd hate to see such a great story end on a cliffhanger.

No objections with the premise and concept, but it's a bit difficult to read because you aren't using enough punctuations.

There are also some instances where you should actually break sentences into smaller pieces, which gives it more natural sentence flow. Read your own sentences and you'll find that some of them are quite a mouthful.

Overall, needs some heavy editing before this would catch the grammar nazi crowd.

MARVELOUS, EXCELLENT, GLORIOUS, I can't think of a better word to describe it!

In this fic Nena turned over a new leaf, mentally matured, found something to live for and best of all took enough levels in bad ass to shrug off the old Emperor Palpatine buzz mojo (gives her 500 bad ass points) and climatically, administer one helluva sweat-inducing karmic, bitch stab to everyone's fave, rotten, smelling, a-hole, sand-nigger, sending him into the next five years, assuming he's likely, still alive. Did I just use the "n" word? I'm not even a racist. Guess that goes to show I'm the more realistically sensible person who hates Ali a lot for getting a buzz from torturing the best of humanity and sympathizes with Nena who is like an abused puppy who needs a hug, unlike most fans.

If Ali's unlucky to be still ticking, I hope his new grill job hurts a hell lot worse than what the first Lockon Stratos gave him, regardless of anesthesia 24/7. Literally meaning, every nerve in his body feels like it's on fire just like that pedophile, cook from the underrated slasher film with a twist, ending called, "Sleepaway Camp".

The Dylandy twins couldn't execute a climatic, battle any better than Nena's.

I liked the final face-off of this fanfic's first season way better than canon! In fact this fanfic is over 9000 leagues better than canon! Nena's triumph over Ali by a fluke was more realistic and well played than Lyle Dylandy's. At that moment I could've sworn I murmured "Use the Force, Nena."

This is the best Gundam 00, fanfic evah!

You know why, I hate it when Animes subject some interesting, and often, sympathy-inducing characters to the worf effect and demote them to ass monkeys when they least deserve it and have so much potential for character development. Worst part is, the (sarcatic tone) "oh so compassionate and kind heroes" albeit, unrealistically, ignore their existence and need of a helping hand. I guess the writers are too lazy for it, or more favorable of other characters. Other Anime characters who suffered from similar abuse and neglect are Rex Raptor/Dinosaur Ryuzaki (My fave character) and Weevil Underwood from "Yugioh" and they have my eternal heartfelt sympathy like Nena, who I feel didn't deserve to die in canon and others. After all, THIS IS FAN FICTION'S PURPOSE!

If I'm not too late, I have some requests to make for season 2:

1. Have Nena personally off Arba Lindt and Arthur Goodman, aka Captain Fatass and if you can afford it have her taunt them, especially Goodman's weight.

2. Have Saji Crossroads get his own Gundam and become a bad ass that he should've been like a previous reviewer requested. (I first saw season 2 of Gundam 00 first and mistook Saji for the main character.)

3. Spare Pang Hercury and Colonel Smirnov and set up Andrei for a very much needed father and son chat if it helps.

4. If Ali is alive, have Saji catch on that he murdered his sister, Kinue and participate with Nena and optionally Lyle Dylandy and Setsuna to beat him in a climatic battle that ends with Ali's Mobile Suit disarmed and stripped of his escape plane and engine, rendering him helpless and trapped like a sardine in a can and leave him to die in an isolated location from oxygen deprivation. Or even better, toss him into the gravity pull of the MOTHER FUCKIN SUN, cooking Ali alive and screaming so he can "FEEL THE PAIN, OF THOSE INFERIOR BEINGS, AS YOU BURN IN HELL! Wait whose line did I steal? JUST PLLLEEEAASE Make Ali's death so utterly, painful that he'd beg for a head shot from Lyle.

If you can't fulfill all but the latter of these requests I'll probably understand.

Anyway great fanfic, God bless you and good luck finishing this fan fic.

How did Ali survive the atmospheric reentry with his mech in that bad of a condition, and on top of that unscathed? The Columbia shuttle disaster comes to mind, because of this. Columbia lost one of its wing plates on its trip to orbit, and just because of a tiny exposure in the wing, the shuttle got cooked from the inside by hot gas and it fell apart on its way down. The abuse that Ares Gundam took from the well placed shot, courtesy of Tieria would've ensured the same fate. Although considering ships and mechs of this setting are probably made of a possibly tougher, ablative alloy, or able to vent out the gases of it would at least make sense that Ali got another "burger makeover" from the atmospheric gases and had to undergo more treatment.

When the Phoenix Gundam Crew explored the space station lab, I was listening to a couple of Resident Evil Zero, soundtracks such as the "Laboratory" theme which fit the situation like a glove.

And God bless the soul of that deceased female, Scientist who had regrets for the unethical experiments that led to the Trinity's creations, and gave her life to give our heroes that apocalyptic log.

I knew it, "Prince Ali" (sarcastic tone) REALLY, should stay on Judgement's good side, or he might learn how hazardous it is to his health to mock somebody with a badder ass mech and attitude than he. If the Phoenix team can barely survive an encounter with Judgement, Ali Al Saachez and his Arche Gundam wouldn't last more than five seconds against him one on one.

In the last paragraph of the chapter Helana and Nena are gradually, starting to get along. Again, I give two thumb's up for the character development!

Very touching chapter! I like the direction Nena's character development is going. The memorial she visited was the wake up call she desperately needed so, she'd finally start to realize what a bitch she's been up until now. I hope Flint hangs in there a little longer. I like how Flint pissed off that interrogator.

Good place for a cliffie and to introduce a new antagonist. In Ali Al Saachez's company, I feel pissed, but this new villain makes me nervous. Prince Ali had better make sure he brought his magic lamp with him. Even so, three wishes aren't gonna save him from this Innovator Big shot if he pisses him off or tries to pull a back stab on him (the fact that genies can't kill doesn't help either). If Ali does he's gonna find taking a bullet to the noggin from Lockon Stratos a VEEEERRRY, preferable alternative to whatever the Innovator Big shot who stalks other innovators "Freddy Krueger style", has in mind. At least Ali won't have to worry about payback being a literal, bitch.