It is not your usual writing style, but I don't mind at all. It was an interesting read. All the commas, helped emphasis, parts of the story, adding to the goodness, of Norway's complex emotions. -See what I did there because I am a dork? It would be a nicer world if all the Nations could think of each other so fondly.

lol it wasn't choppy to me. i liked it. in fact it sounds much like the begining of the ff itself. maybe you should continue it a little further, like denmark suddenly appears bugging norway (as usual) and starts anting about how prussia stole his beer. then he goes to hug norway who kicks him in the balls before he acually gets the chance. the poor guy...but that would be awesome!

jsyk your writing is sacrosanct

i eagerly await your next update & parentheses ftw~

i love tsudere norway. and denmark/norway. so i like. much.

D': So sad... If there is one thing that I love about your writing, it's how you can capture different pairings, it's very realistic with all the complicated feelings. I really liked the ending, "...when he thinks of a bright young man with a goofy grin and all his dreams laid ahead of him, he simply feels a sense of warmth." They are such cute friends~ I love them that way~

And I like the mentions of fairytales, too XDD Gosh, I'm such a little kid...

Pfft, tylbmdg... lol that's one long acronym