Reviews for The Fox and the Flute |
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![]() ![]() ![]() my condolences great story so far |
![]() ![]() This was a good read. Pls continue with this |
![]() ![]() Eh good job sorry for your loss |
![]() ![]() Take your time there's no rush u needed some break anyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pls more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plz keep writing i enjoy your story |
![]() ![]() Be happy :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story my friend hope you continue it Thanks for the time in writing this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chin up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnd now I'm all caught up. Welcome back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliche horrible background for all the feels in order to make bitchy character a victim and subject to sympathy. Because why not? He he. I forgot how funny this was. T-"Stupid pink bitch, what makes you think I want to be friends with you!" *spends next two minutes awkwardly maneuver king herself from the stool into her wheelchair.* Talk about your awkward silences. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Obvious Naruto's parents house is obvious. All older ninja keeping Naruto's parents identity from Naruto are dicks. All ninja who condone torture are dicks. All Naruto's supposed friends are dicks. Redhead enemy is more trustworthy then supposed comrades. Naruto is stupid. Naruto and Tayuya are adorable together. He he I saw the update and decided to rearead this fic. Still as good as when I faved it. |
![]() ![]() i know the feeling of lossing a close friends, its not easy but i hope your doing well |
![]() ![]() ![]() A well done and interesting story. It was well done to see how it all turned out for Naruto and Tayuya as they are now stuck with each other indefinitely as well as a team. Liked the progress that the two made with each other as they got to know one another and became friends. The cover story was nicely done and to be close to the truth was interesting. The interaction between Naruto and Tayuya is just adorable as Naruto helps Tayuya open herself up a bit more and comes to trust Naruto greatly. Naruto is steadily improving himself as he wants to be able to get stronger. Switching point of views to infiltrating Orochimarus hideouts was well done and covered another point in the story quite well. Thank you. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have my condolences and great story so far |