The double boss battle was really cool especially when the two would attack each other instead of their common target. I am happy you made the choice of Kairi being her own fighter and not just a part of a trio.

*Sidles in 6 years after the story was completed* "hello, I am here to review".
I really loved this story. It was recommended to me and I do not regret following up. This would have made such a great alternative to what happened in canon (canon being that Kairi was lame and used as phlobotinum to make plot happen, rather than as a character), there's nothing bad I can think of to say right now that doesn't come down to "I simply don't headcanon that". So overall it was really good, so engaging. I was keeping the tab open on my phone to read on my way to and from work and I my commute never felt long enough to read as much as I wanted until the end. I'm favouriting this forever.

Got to read the whole thing, and honestly? This is one of, if not the best Kingdom Hearts fanfic I've ever read. It's true to the characters and the games through and through, and you took us to some awesome and pretty underrated Disney worlds, even following all of the stories crazy rules and plot twists to make your story fit perfectly into the games canon. Absolute perfection.

... I still want more, though.

So far its wonderful. I want to see more

Hey there! Just want to thank you for writing this pretty awesome story!

I really like how you used the lesser known Disney worlds and characters from their TV series instead of the movies. It gave a whole unsung heroes kind of perspective since the story centred on Kairi and Selphie who were almost background characters in kingdom hearts 2.

I found that your method of gaining magic, new key blades and being able to understand what the key blades did were very cool and the idea of fighting from "memory" was very well done! Oh and I'm also really glad you put Balamb garden in there. It's too bad that there wasn't enough Time to explain wth Selphie's deal is in appearing in Destiny's island and not in Balamb. That could have been another story altogether I guess but hey it's not like Tetsuya Nomira will ever have time to get around to it.

Just a small point, I think cut out some of your story as some bits seem to proceed on referencing an earlier part of the story that I can't seem to find. Either that, or its a technique you used in your writing to save time. If it's the latter, then don't mind me!

Cheers
Keep Writing

Holy crap you have Darkwing Duck.

That's it, I'm reading the entire thing.

Buzz Lightyear of Starcommand. Your pullin' out the big wigs of my childhood. I loved that series. Too bad Woody didn't get anything like that.

{You never can tell when you'll need a smoke screen, or a grappling hook..."

She took the pistol, and in her hands, it shrank to a tenth of its original size, and a chain with a clasp on the end appeared.

"...or a small novelty item to hold your house keys," he concluded in confusion.}
That was absolutely hilarious. Classic DW.

"When in trouble you
Call DW.
Darkwing Duck!"

Awesome!

Found this...read this...LOVE IT! I love stories about Kairi becoming a keyblader, and bringing Gadget(loved rescue rangers) into the mix makes it awesome! Continuing.

Enjoyed that last one. Been a while since I seen Gummi Bears.

Getting into this and at the Kim chapter. Loving that old Disney shows are getting to be part of this. Shame that Selphie and Ron didn't get a simultaneous "booya!" in though.

My mind: ASPLODE

You really made it fit into the original story line so well! ;A; The very end almost brought me to tears.. Sometimes, it's the only thing you can do. I guess Kari must understand that far too well...

I love this story, and I'm so happy to have found it. It was purely brilliant.

The action! The suspense! The sudden disbarment! The weaponless history!

THAT. WAS. ABSOLUTELY. AMAZING!

All my hopes my expectations were surpassed, and I even start to feel a little bad for Nelera... Bravo, the final heart's locations were brilliant. And now, the door has been opened... to what she's wanted all along... ;w;

So Nelera's plan is now revealed... She's going to revive Larxene! :O I hadn't expected the hearts to be able to do that. And Kari got an amazing new keyblade, too! *u* It's a lovely design, how do you come up with them?

Traverse Town... At least Squall can have his letter from Rinoa now! Since the story's nearing the final chapter, I guess the boss fight is near as well... Can't wait!