A very good and interesting story so far. Any updates planned?

BBWAAAAHHAHAHAHAHAH! *cuts icha icha series to tiny bits of paper* Hey Konan?

Konan: Yes?

Me: Would you mind using your skills to do something to the remains of the icha icha series?

Konan: *grins evilly* Finally, At last I will have my revenge on those accursed smut trash. Can you get Jiraiya here for me please?

Me: HECK YES! *grabs Ero-sennin from the tree that he is peeping from* Here you go Konan. Have fun with the Torture, I mean Origami. :D

Konan: Thanks.

Review: Lol, the ever constant Jiraiya Bashing :D! Great chapter.

no offense but this chapter seemed REALLY rushed and the grammar(lol I cant even spell it right :p) needs a little fixing. But great story none the less.

Faves.

update?

This is the best story i have read in ages. I am interested as to how the story will develop from here, so please review soon.

love it really good

Dun dun dun! The Sharingan has been revealed! XD! This chapter came out much better than the others. There are a few spelling and gramatical errors. But since it's one in the morning, I won't go into too much detail.

This chapter reading it sounds like it was rushed. Slow down! If you like I can help you edit this fanfiction.

awesome story update soon

I can review on my old computer but not my new one(Anymore at

least) Real review:MY GOD! THIS STORY ERADICATES WITH AWESOMENESS!

awsome please update soon

awsome 15 out of 10 update soon

Hey. Awesome twist to the story. Mai has the sharingan never would have imagined that. keep up the good work.

10 out of 5. Hope you update soon.

Great chapter