This was so. Freaking. Cute. Instant fave, nuff said.

SIMPLE AND CLEAN
IS THE WAY THAT YOU'RE MAKIN' ME FEEEEEL TONIGHT!
IT'S HAAAARD TO LET IT GO!

HOOOOLD ME!
WHATEVER LIES BEYOND THIS MOOOORNING,
I DOWSN'T MATTER AT ALL!
REGARDLESS OF WARNINGS,
THE FUTURE DOESN'T SCARE ME
AT ALLLLLLLLL!
NOTHING'S LIKE BEFORE!

KINGDOM HEARTS REFERANCE! Xd

It's set on a Christmas day...
and it just made it better! It made the story flow somewhat...sweeter and some Christmas romance...But, Beat's reaction...Awhaha!
Good job on this!

you, my friend, are making me ADDICTED to joshxRyme stuff, dang you!

I hate it and love it at the same time!

I love it! But...now Beat's gonna kill him!

holy crap, why is it that every weird paring (of boy and girl, i find yaoi kinda disturbing) always seems so god damn cute! Very well done, love the ending, make a sequel or moar chapters pleaze! \(-.-)/

Ah ha hah. Forgot to blink that last chapter. Hee. Ow. -watering eyes-

So, ah, yes, it's a yummy Joshyme. YES. xD Short, but not rushed, and um... yeah. Just... awesome sauce. Yep.

xD

I'm sorry, but the softie in me won't NOT let me say this: *clears throat* D'aw... My only regret is that I got to this story so late!

If nothing else, you managed to give Joshua a little more soul than in your usual JoshuaxRhyme. While, true, it's interesting to see conflict and things going wrong and feelings getting in the way in a JxR, every once in a while it's even nicer to see things go smoothly. A very well written fic, and one that was much enjoyed!

This was pretty good. The only thing that bothered me was the song lyrics at the end, but incorporating them into the text was better than having the song playing in the background or something :/

Overall, it wasn't bad.

*Bows down to your glory*

I adore you... XD

I loved it, I loved it ALL!

Incredible... just incredible...

This is just inspiring... :)

(Enter my non-existant 2nd personality)

I think she gets it now... -smacks me senseless-

(Exit my... okay I think you get it)

Why must you be so mean?

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As you see I'm a person who writes humorous stuff. Oo

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Other that, as in all my random-ness, This story was just spectacular.

THIS WAS FANTASTIC!

An instant fave!

And I bet you get a review from a certain someone who almost invented Joshyme!

Reviews HELLZ TO THE YES PLEASE.

That was awesome, I love that. Am I allowed to use that line?

Anyway, I live the Simple and Clean song too.

More, please?

I'm inspired to write some Joshyme now. _