very good and you got the feelings of all the characters just right

It feels like you're actually watching an episode. Beautiful, thank you!

I just loved this. The mood of the piece just fits with the later seasons, a bit melancholy and 'mushy' maybe but also very warm and sweet.
Not only do you write really really well, you are so good at capturing each of the characters. I love your Radar, could just hear him say these things. And your Hawkeye is just perfect. I've been reading a lot of fanfic lately, and am amazed at how difficult he seems te be to put on paper (or how little effort people put in to really capture a character, don't know...) but you nailed him!
Thanks for your stories (I've read a lot of them), please keep writing!

I think that this is exactly how the characters would react to the situation. With BJ and Hawkeye joking the whole time, Charles and Margaret trying to act uncaring, it was absolutely perfect. I kind of disliked, however, that Hawkeye hid behind a joking little poem, before spilling his feelings.

Just to let you know... This was one of the best MASH fanfics I have EVER read!

Aw, I love this piece, you show everyone's personalites so well, both the angried and the serious.

Bravo!

Eve

Wonderful story.

okay, seriously, has anyone else noticed that when Radar's voice is heard over the PA system, he's actually on camera most of the time? Great story, with all of them perfectly in character :D well done

This was wonderful well done! I loved it!

A nice and true to character fic! Everyone's dialogue was perfect if you ask me. I was a little disappointed that Hawk had to joke even in a serious situation such as this; I had hoped he'd skipped the poem about the blood and gone right to the nice stuff he said to all his friends. Short of wanting to turn Hawk over my knee, I did like the story, and you did capture the stresses Army personnel do go through. It can't be easy when there is no privacy, and you even have to shower in such close quarters!

I preferred Hawkeye's first summation: “‘Roses are red, blood is red too, is it any wonder, we’re all feeling blue?’” He had nailed it in his inimitable way, telling everyone to give themselves a break. Thanks for this pitch perfect contribution.

I loved Hawkeye and BJ's wisecracks in the beginning and I thought it was a good idea how you used references from other episodes.

This story was straight out of an episode! I could so see this playing out as if the actors were performing it! As I read the dialogue, I could imagine the voices of tha actors saying the lines! I also love the sentiment that they are like family; they squabble and get on each other's nerves, but they also care for each other like real family!

Excellent story that, in a nutshell summed up the entirety of Mash. Margaret, BJ, Klinger, Father, Radar, Potter have all comported themselves ireproachably with these exercises, I'm highly impressed. Everyone's favorite charactoer, though not mine, comported himself as per usual, in complete ignoramus fashion. Keep it up.

Hey, this was great! I enjoyed seeing al the characters opening up and being completely honest with each other. They were all true to their character and the dialogue was perfect! It could be mistaken for a real episode!