Reviews for It'll be Okay
lukriinah chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Lovely story.
Not too long, still enough description of everything and you brought the feelings across pretty neatly.

Excellent really, only thing that bothered me personally was that Kyouya kept saying Tamaki-kun, it just seemed a little ooc to me.

Favourited. c:
coloxrlessrainbow chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
Hello there!

I really loved reading this, it was incredible. Everyone seemed IC, even Kyoya which only few people manage. Honestly, there's nothing to criticise. Favourited! :)

One thing though!

"quand" is French for "when" - You'd have to say "depuis quand" for it to mean "since when"

coloxrlessrainbow
AnimeAmie chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
that...was...amazing.
wish there was more O-O
wishIwereanime chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
aw, i felt so bad for Tamaki- how could Haruhi be so cruel? D:

but I'm glad Kyouya comforted him ;D
PrinceCalamitus chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Not really rated M, but it was still sweet, TamaxKyo forever! Who needs Haruhi XD
DdraigCoch chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Interesting premise but a series of small mistakes and some serious OOC behaviour really detracts from the story. A good BETA reader would be able to help you with most of it, and then a decent story would be able to shine through. Also, you need to put a disclaimer in there. It's protection for you, after all, and no one else. There's a reason why you're supposed to add disclaimers to your fics.
Rainbow Black chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I loved this!
whitemokona234 chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
aww! poor tama-chan! hooray 4 kyou-chan, getting the guy of his dreams! fuck haru-chan 4 hurting tama-chanlike that! and yay 4 tama-chan and kyou-chan getting 2gether! XD
Dior Crystal chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
it may be short, but it's well cute! :D

i like it, but i felt sorry for tamaki when haruhi rejected him like that. D: be nice to tamaki! but then again, tamaki wouldnt hve ended up with kyouya if she didnt reject him, so i guess, good going, haruhi? xD

good job on writing this! keep it up :P
Deathnotebliss chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
wow. What a great chapter.

Such passion. I ESPECIALLY liked the dialogue at the end. That was genius.

Keep up the good work. Seriously.
destroythisaccount chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Simply amaazziing.
Seliphra chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Cute and sad...all at once! Good job, it was an excellent one-shot!
oberobindobin chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
oh i love it! you should write more for it! please!
NewUser666 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Aw~ so sweet... Really wish that you're gonna write a 2nd chapter where Kyouya continue to 'do' Tamaki XP
Kyogou chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Aww, that was so sweet. Made me want to cry, almost... very well done, especially for such a short piece!
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