damn great ending

capitol - capital

A farther - A father

the capitol - the capital

before they get hear - before they get here

will be perfect day - will be a perfect day

a hoard - a horde

her dressed had been torn - her dress had been torn

tot eh test - to the test

let's so see - let's go see

I like the story. Want I do not like is how he become a "benevolent" dictator. Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely.

What I hate the most is the fact he refuse to share knowledge to cure cancer and other diseases. Refuses to release information about anti matter based power. He say that people of earth are not ready but when will they be ready? Technology, for all its potential to do evil, the good it can do makes up for it.

By withholding the technology in the ship, he is preventing the rise of a utopia. Anti matter as an energy source, is a game changer it is one of the most efficient ways to get energy except maybe from using blackholes. Plus with the medical knowledge they have, they could probabbly cure aging They could extend life indefinately. They could have killed death.

I absolutely love the story no matter how depressing it is but Musubi dying like that is just so sad and I really hate Seo I wish you would have had him die

OMG that omake was hilarious!

And humble…. lol.

a sad but we'll done story. thank you