| Reviews for If |
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   HotchsGirl chapter 4 . 9/6/2015 unbelievable... I#ve read this story years ago and every once in a while I come back and read it again. It#s just one of the greatest fanfics ever written I always shed a tear :-) |
| dolphinrain chapter 4 . 11/11/2012 Nice story. Wow, Colby whumping n a little Charlie. But love Charlie n Colby helping each other. |
| nochenada chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 I freaking love this freakin story! :D 3 i read over and ovr again all the time! |
| pechika chapter 4 . 7/4/2011 You used one of my favorite Poems loved yur story. |
| HotchsGirl chapter 1 . 2/10/2010 believe me: this ist the greatest fanfic I#ve ever read! I#m absolutely impressed! greetings & kisses |
| pretzel.in.an.egg chapter 4 . 11/14/2009 Loved Ian in this! Such a dude. Nice characterisation too, good read! ~Claudia |
| potterqueen86 chapter 4 . 9/21/2009 it was good. to bad u did not have colby stip down to his birthday suit and do all that. now would funny. |
| taleanaomi chapter 4 . 9/9/2009 Great story! Everything sounded like it came right from an episode and it made for a great read. One or two spelling mistakes, but it didn't take away from the story at all. Thanks for sharing. |
| JazzieG chapter 1 . 8/31/2009 I enjoyed reading this, glad Colby came out of it alive and kicking! It prompted me to actually print Kipling's poem "If" out and it's now on my desk at work! |
| epalladino chapter 4 . 8/30/2009 Great story. I loved how you worked everything out. Thanks, Beth |
| coconut-dreamer chapter 4 . 8/29/2009 I love how Charlie just went out there and how Colby wouldn't let Charlie sacrifice himself Colby. Edgerton was his ususal cocky self which I loved too. Overall, a fantastic story! I really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing. |
| Lily G chapter 4 . 8/29/2009 That was a good story. I'm sad it's finished... |
| rotezora chapter 4 . 8/29/2009 really cool end. i know colby would have sacrificed himself . you did really great. i enjoyed reading. |
| PattyB chapter 4 . 8/28/2009 Perfect finish and you worked the words to If in nicely. I was so proud of Charlie, particularly that he attributed his actions to the selfless life and works of his brother. Bravo! |
| Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 4 . 8/28/2009 Great resolution! There's no way Don would have let Charlie go out there, but Charlie was right - he could do nothing else. And Colby was outstanding! Loved the tension and action throughout the entire story. You did a great job with four chapters. And I can't believe you have another great story going at the same time.! I can't even complete one! Great story, wonderfully written, realistic, completely in character. Thanks for sharing it. |
