I really do like your second epilogue better!
And I really did like your story. Though I did read it in parts because it is rather angsty.
And I felt it would trigger me otherwise. (taking over Harry's feeling sand all)
But that also means your depiction of Harry struggle is, in my humble but experienced opinion, Rather realistic. Good Job!

Great start!

You really had a good plot in the story but you didn't use it well and your chapters were short ...and you never explained that much ! You had the chance to make it have more depth like putting severs point of view and the others too and show the slow process of his recover and the last chapters were so scattered and puzzling and un clear and it ended fast ...sorry but I think sev's dad existence is useless in the story ...
I'm sorry but I'm truing to honest ...
A.
P.s:
I would really love it if you read my story and reviewed it and told your friends about it

Loved your story , now favourited!

A very realistic look at cutting, etc. I know, you know, it doesn't end that quickly but you tried really well to explain it. Very well done.

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I thought it was fine, really nice :). Both of the epilogues were good, I'm glad I found this story!

Brilliantly written...and completely engaging. Well done. I read your second epilogue as well as this one, but I think I prefer you first attempt. Its more of an emtional roller coaster...packs a bigger impact overall, in my opinion. You should be very proud of this story. Fantastic! :)

I would like to inform you that Nurse Duck scares me more than I thought (s)he would and seeing as I'm going to sleep after this I will have Nurse Duck related nightmares
Thank You for the Wonderful (minus Nurse Duck) Story

really really well done

I wish there had been a break between the story and random an ... what pussies to self harm...you should hurt other people not yourself...just causing more pain, and if you think 'it's releasing my pain'...it's not, and you will 99% hate those scars when you get in your 20's Teens are your angsty years it finishes. College is 100% different. Loser thing in HS are cool in college. Not to sound like a inspirational speaker, but I used to cut when I was a teen until I figured out what an idiot move it was. The only one I was hurting was myself.

the first epilogyue cinfused me xD i thought he had died :s

it's really good!

are you alright? now?

i hope so :)

well done :)!

I like your story.
But i think you should've written the time between chapter 15 and the epilogue.
It's nice but a bit short.

I'm on chapter eleven now and I'm loving it. Do write on about this subject in your other stories. I enjoy reading it. By the way, I loved the guy in the st. Patheus hospital is hilarious. Do you mind if I use a similar character like that one for a story of mine?