I swear literature must have the biggest crush on you, you two make a great couple. This beaut is proof of your companionship for each other. And I mean, you gotta be dating formatting now cause the way you introduced us to the story is so smartly amzing it hurts.

Oh god.

This makes me cry every time, even when I know where it's going. Thank you, this is brilliant.

Wow. Okay. That was- yeah. Can I just reiterate everything Mello7 said in their review? Because you include things people don't even process, you know. And it's weird because I must've favourited your other fic years ago because it said it was already on my favourites list but I don't remember reading it.

Anyway, 2009 I suppose you've left FFN by now. But I think it's nice the notes reviews should stay here, like some kind of tribute.

I like the way you incorporated the AC in there. I remember I once wrote a fic about the Organization wearing trenchcoats in summer but once I stated the obvious it felt like there was nothing to say. Axel casts around, like real people do. And he's humble, sort of. It's good.

This was quite different to other fan fics that I read. I don't know if you're still writing or anything, but this was fantastic. Especially, that last phrase, "...like kissing an apocalypse." Amazing.

Nicely done :)

so simple! So great to read! haha, i really liked this one, i think the way that you changed from scene to scene was perfect, it was fast-paced, but it still made sense.

Awesomeness. I love how you get across the whole feel of being dead. And I've heard that whole "dying is getting on a train and you get out on all the stops of your life" story before, but...you do it so well.

I like how Axel didn't feel alive til meeting Roxas. Aw. :3

Fabulous.

~LWD~

This is f*cking amazing. The most genius, the most gorgeous fic I've read in months. And that's all I can say, really, because all the words are clogged up in my throat and this was truly something else. I can't remember the last time I was this impressed. Just... wow.

Let me tell you you are absolutely fucking brilliant and just blew my mind in so many ways. It was so unique and beautiful, it made me want to smile and cry all at once. Thank you.

Hi..hi.

Your stories..um, I've told you that they kill me, right?

Well..um, they do. In case I haven't told you.

They really, really hurt.

I, um, thank you. They hurt in a good way, I guess.

Um, sorry I..god, I probably sound so stupid. I don't mean to.

And, it makes me really happy that you like seeing me review.

Really happy.

Dude, how flipping cool. I love this idea. You like playing with surreal settings, don't you? I loved the abrupt transitions from one scene to the next, and yay for the ending 3

This is ever, ever so lovely. 3

Okay, so by the time I got to the part with Demyx, I was thinking about how... argh, well how people may deal (unconsciously) with things they haven't really dealt with... before moving on to something new. For me, there are (and were) some people in this world that I'd like to meet just one more time so that we could part in good terms or at least understanding each other.

But then when Demyx says "- you're going to be okay." I got it into my head that Axel's dead and his little train ride with his dark angel Roxas is actually a kind of passing to the otherside. And he gets to 'meet' some people again.

But hey, I haven't finished reading yet, just wanted to type that so I wouldn't forget. Loving this fic, you've got your style. It's hard to put my finger on it, really. But it's yours.

“Most people already know by the time I see them." Okay, now I'm pretty sure Axel is dead. And the stops along the way are his opportunities to settle things. Actually this kind of thing is something I've thought about a lot. Like, once you die... is there a chance to say a few last words to those who meant something to you?

I've had this image of lying on a bed in a non-descript room (that could be anywhere) and talking to someone. A friend or a lover or a parent. Or some... angel creature (that doesn't look like an angel) who helps you understand.

And now Axel meets his long gone mother, I'm going to cry.

You... talented, amazing person, I fucking love you. A booming ocean should be cliché but it's not here, and the endings in your fics are always so apocalyptic and emotional and just absolutely perfect.

Maybe I should just write my own version of passing to the other side. But I'm not sure about he details. Anyway, thanks for this beautiful piece.

I ran out of new ways of telling you how much I love your writing an age ago. It's just not fair that you keep on finding new ways of reminding me why I do.

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Okay, uh...wow, geez. This is beautiful, and confusing in a good way, and I'm not really sure what else to say about it. I love it.

best akuroku...evar.