Mark's speech in health was so touching. I'm a Daddy's Girl myself. Every girl should have a loving protective father. (Sweet Smile)

OH MY GOD THIS IS AWESOME!

sweet ;D

cute. :) i like how you took the lines from the movie and adapted them a bit, while still keeping their gentleness and meaning. it's so sweet how he views his daughter and vows to protect her. :) good job.

Nice.

beautiful! amazing! awesome! i loved and cried when He said those words in health class! ] :)

awesome job; cute story.

Oh ny god, amazing!

Nicely written, I loved it! But I would be there to comfort her and beat that ass up

Touching... I like it! ;)

I agree, Mike's speech in health class was so sweet and touching. Such a sweet oneshot.

Aw, I really liked it, Joycypo! :D

Okay, forgive me for not doing this earlier, but I kinda... Oh wells. No excuses.

Right.

This was touching. The story was simple, you know? But it wasn't some uselessly fickle sappy oneshot that we often come across. Okay, fine, WE write them ourselves... but this was different and nice. You portrayed Mike's emotions really well, and in such a small word count too. Bravo. Brava. You go, girl!...Even though your blatant refusal to use 'Hell Rises' as the title for your new story hurt me more than I could ever say...

But I'll be generous and forgive you. Since you wrote such a darling piece.

Zef is hot,

Momo