This is sad :( And really well written

Daaaaaaaaammmmmmmnnnnnnnn! I love it! Such a crazy AU! It's amazing.

Cool

OUCH. just OUCH, jet losing his family twice is extremely painful.

You did a great job in writing this up. The premise was interesting and I love how you explored it and Jet's thoughts on the more particular aspects of his life as a fire-nation. Also, your characterisation of everyone was impressive, and I think you portrayed Jet's paranoia nicely. :L

-Sked-San-san

P.S.: I had a good laugh at Lu Ten's correspondences to Iroh's own responses (although we never get to see Iroh's. D:). And yes, I am aware of the ramble-ey-ness of this review; my freudian excuse is that i'm an idiot at heart. :V

Oh such a wonderful plot bunny. The idea is so tantalizing and part of me would love to know what your plans would have been if this had turned into something more than a one-shot. Would Jet have followed Zuko in his banishment? Would he have ran away and he'd struggle over helping his 'brother' or the earth nation? So many wonderful ideas that derive from this one plot. Thanks for sharing.

Very interesting. I love Lu Ten very much, I wish though, even if it's unimportant, that the creators of Last Airbender, would have revealed more.

This was great! A creative premise, well-written, and with excellent characterization to top it all off. It could have made a great start to a full story, but it works nicely as a one-shot as well. :3

What an amazing end. I'm bit sad that it's a oneshot.

This is freaking amazing.

LuTen. I just wanna hug him along with Jet and Zuko.

Nice twist! Too bad its only a one shot.