I hope you'll update this soon; I'm actually quite interested in it. By the way, I'm sorry if I seemed to have been begging you to check out my fanfic "Choices" recently. It's just that I want to be sure that I'm satisfying my readers' interests, and you seem to be a very open person.

By the way, even though "Choices" is mostly about Mungojerrie and Rumpleteazer, Macavity is the third main character. Did I also mention that in one of its later chapters I have a somewhat angsty Bombalurina/Macavity moment? I think you'd enjoy it!

If you ever need help on any of your fanfics in the future, just let me know! I'd be glad to provide some assistance.

I also like this. I couldn't imagine Bombalurina living with Macavity and those brutal henchcats, though.

I admire how strong and resilient you make her out to be.

Despite a few grammatical errors, this is a very nice introduction. I'm a fan of Bombalurina/Macavity.

Great story. A few punctuation errors but still good.

By the way, I've been enjoying your reviews on my story so far. So...would you like to become a Stray In Training? I'd been thinking and you'd make a great little sister for my character Ruby, The Scarlett Stray.(An American Shorthair by the way).

Also, I'd not only put you in the story, but I'm thinking of making my original Strays In Training story into a flash animation. You could voice act your character.

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Tanaka InuTasha (or my Stray name, Tonka Topper)

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I luvre this

so much

it rox

i like the idea of macavity and bomba as mates

Hi thanks for the reviews, I will update it in the next few days, I promise everyone that

Oh, and I like the name of Macavity's clan. I do, I really never would have thought of that name for a clan. If u do update, I might be able to send in two Positive reviews...

this has peaked my fascination. Kan u update another chapter today?

Wow...that was extremely Dark. I loved it! It had a lot of passion, and I can imagine a story behind it! Great work! I hope to see an update!