ha! thank you for the scenery porn. i quite liked the way you phrased things. ;)

HUWAW! COOL STORY! PLEASE POST MORE! I WOULD BE GLAD :))

There's very little of porn inside this story. xD A marvellous shot. I don't think I've ever read -Man's stories as much beautiful as your ones; they've a vague feeling of sadness, light and permanent, which really suits the atmospheres of the manga.
And, gorsh, Mirand and Lavi weren't a couple I thought I would have ever seen! xD

I really liked this. The small moments and little details. Thanks for writing!

Scenery porn is win.

But srsly. Your writing style is gorgeous, and though I usually hate Miranda - escpecially in fics - I actually kind of love her in this. Lavi too, but I love him always. XD

The whole thing's really sweet. I loved painting all the different images in my mind and tying them to the characters.

Lovely scenery porn. ;)

Beautiful descriptions; you write scenery pron fantastically xD I love the metaphorical language, as well, and just the way you play with the words.

that was lovely 3

Definitely loved the imagery of the scenery here. Absolutely wonderful and gorgeous. It made me feel as if I were there, experiencing all the seasons and traveling through all these countries. This pairing certainly caught my interest. We normally don't see these two interacting, but you did a lovely job writing them. Great job!