Reviews for Freshmen Fifteen
Halle Alexis chapter 1 . 3/17/2017
Loved this story!
Lf4 chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
Loved
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Interesting first year for Dasey.
Lcsaf chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
I really liked the ending. I think it fits Casey and Derek and the story perfectly.
Avide chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
I liked this story, but in answer to your author note at the bottom...I don't like or hate the ending. It doesn't feel like an ending. Dunno what you should've put after it, though, to wrap things up. After all, conclusions aren't easy, right?
liferomancesher chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I absolutely loved it. Perfection.
sfbxfcb chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Wonderful!
S.H. Briggs chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
If you hate the ending, think it over. I don't hate it, but...I see what you mean. So think it over.
Brontesis chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Hey, why'd you hate the ending? Not everything has to be spelt out and the last line was fine. I thought you rushed 14 and 15, thus missing out on some of the anticipation that fires the earlier sections but still, I prefer this understated, open ending to a cliched one... for what that's worth.
smi1e chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Awh, I love them ! :)
Frogster chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Aw, that was cute. I'm glad you're getting back into Dasey. :D
kathiekay chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Aww, it's cute! I'm not sure about the ending ... maybe if you changed "boy and girl" to "man and woman," it would give it more of the Dasey inference. However, I think you did a wonderful job with it, and I look forward to reading more of your work!
itsi3 chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Ya its really good but 15. kinda gets to me. I like all but the last sentence. Hate that sentence. NOT becasue you wrote it! Just makes it seem Dasey-less, ya know? I don't know how to fix it though.

Very cute one-shot!

~Crystal
emmaspirate chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
The ending would of been better if there was a kiss...but it still was a good storie.
jayley chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
that was cute! the ending would be better if they had a kiss!
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