Wow this is amazing.

Please write more

I'm not crying, my eyes are just sweating. Regardless, it was a very good read.

-V

cute but sad story... loved it!

Well... There's a lot to be said for the writing. I personally don't care for stories that involve the death of our favorite protagonist, kind of think that should be in the description. You create many tiny insights and windows into their relationship, but they seem to me to be too brief and vague for me to really feel for Ino. In fact, because I'm more familiar with the Sakura/Naruto relationship, I felt more poignancy from that one sentence, "Sakura took it hard." Fleshed out I think this has a lot of potential. Of course, I won't read it ... as I said, I don't like my hero's to be killed off ;) Good luck, keep writing. ~del

Wow this was amazing ] I loved it.

Forever Yours, Ino's Demon

It's so cute and depressing at the same time...

I like it!

Sasuke... I hate it...

Good job!

ver nice i liked it

awsome

good story. but you should have how he died too. it would be better if you had it. now i'm just confused.