I love love love the last one, where you rewrote history and gave him peace with his mom, you rock. And oh, poor sweet Spike. I loved the two guys' relationship.

Is flashpoint a real story. Or are those just actors I need to know

I HATED this episode. It was so depressing. Keep writing:)

Aww, so sad.. Good chapter though. Loved it.

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That was really sad - very poignant. You show tremendous talent in the latest chapter. I thought it was incredibly well written and it perfectly fits Lew's character. He's a really noble, humble, genuine guy but, because his character isn't as central or aggressive as some of the others, it's hard to grasp him. I thought you did a really good job of doing that.

So good job. Hats off to you.

Hhahahah!Great chapter!

Aww, great but sad chapter.

haha i like this! please update soon

Hahahah!Nice start!