Ok if that was Eddie boy Embry would have smelled him... seriously

Love this

I loved reading this story! It was so sweet, but still had plenty of drama. Can't wait for the sequel! Happy writing :)

absolutely adorable I loved this story very much thank u for sharing!

love love love this story, had everything in it that made it a great read. Can't wait to read the sequel

to be honest I can't read this anymore. Bella is 18 she has the right to a life and boyfriend without Charlie putting so many restrictions on it and Bella should of stuck up for herself more she's not breaking any laws by being with her boyfriend in that way.

this is for chapter 6 she won't hurt Jacob but she's ok hurting embry her soul mate?

why would you give Jacob that much power over Bellas life? she's not gonna be with her soul mate cause her friend isn't happy with it? then he can't be her true friend

I'm sorry but that's stupid if Jacob really was her best friend he would be happy that she was happy. You don't put your happiness on hold for anyone!

That was weird. Edward attacked Embry with the intent to kill. Whether Alice out a stop on it shouldn't matter. The treaty is broken or at least shouldn't include him anymore. How can they chat semi friendly after he had his teeth around Embry's neck?
At least one person should have been phased and gotten help. I doesn't make sense that no one was. Funeral or not. Vicky is still around. I loved that Bella stood up for her relationship with Embry and even said that Edward lost his chance for friendship after the attack. But I would have loved even more to see her ripping him a new one for entering her room uninvited and yelling at him to get the fuck off her property and never ever come back after he attacked Embry. Her reaction wasn't strong enough for my liking. I would be hurt if I were in Embry's shoes despite the fact that she chose him.

I don't really understand Charlie's reaction. He is "disappointed in her" because she made out with her boyfriend? She is 18 for crying out loud. Americans...
Don't get me wrong. My dad probably didn't like thinking of me as a sexual being when I was 18. But he never would dream of saying that he was disappointed in me for being a grown up human. And if he did I would put him in his place and not let him do this like Bella and Embry did. I also don't understand why he brought up Jake? Does he expect Bella to be with him even if doesn't want to? Just because he does and he is his friend's son? Does she have to force herself to develop feelings for him? Or isn't she supposed to love somebody until poor Jakey has moved in? They never were together and she never promised him anything. I love Charlie, but this version is confusing and not really like able. The two of them were more mindful of his feelings than they had to. It's the 21st century. He doesn't have a claim on her just because he saw her first. It's not a hookup. We're talking feelings here.

Excellent story! Excited to read the sequel :-)

aww cute

454?
that isn't much.

Bellatective …:)

oh dear
people is going to keep interrupting them
I wonder who will be next to walk in on them