Must. Read. More!

I thought that this is a really interesting story so far. Rewriting the battles for the third part of the exam was a surprise but it was horrible. Sakura winning was a surprise too say the least with how you have portrayed her.

Beating up Hinata, not a high point. Naruto doesn't harbor the greatest hatred to the villagers, or at least that was not expressed very much within previous chapters. Hinata was one out of many children at the academy that didn't help him and this change in Naruto to hate her for not doing anything was defiantly unexpected. Hinata isn't innocent but Naruto's actions that were displayed do not seem justified.

Naruto's anger at those who were wrong I find justified and understandable, but Hinata never saw that in Naruto. Her lack of support is a result of many things and Naruto has expressed before understanding for many things, her situation seemed to be one of those things.

In the matter of two chapters it seems you have made him increasingly dark. Before, you were doing a great job on keeping him in a realistic situation and his reactions and changes quite believable, without making him a genius nor a pessimist.

My view of this changed radically with this chapter though.

please please make the new story asap please if it is anyhting like this story i will want to read it please update asap with that new story please it will be an honor to read that and to continue to

buena historia

Damn, atleast you are going to start the story over:).

Dude when is story coming out?

r u writing it or someone else?

"Naruto saw the opportunity and quickly punched a startled Hinata in the face."

Too bad it wasn't a chidori; but still, that was awesome. (God, I hate Hinata.)

well i liked how it was until now. maybe you didn't get right the part where naruto turns dark and against all of konoha, but i can't wait for the rewrite.

I was interested in this story, but then I skipped to the end to see what happens, after all I don't want to read a story that ends up rubbish.

There is no way that Kakashi and Kurenai will work out, so it is a good idea you stopped. That prick doesn't deserve Kurenai either.

Looking forward to your new story, and have fun writing it.

nice

great work.

so your rewriteing the story under an difrent title ?

If you're not satified with the story I understand. It's your call and your right to end the story. I just hope in the new story you're less cruel to Hinata then you were in this.

AW MAN I REALLY WANTED TO SEE HOW NARUTO DEALS WIT KURENAI AND I REALLY WANTED TO SEE SAKURA GET HER ASS HANDED TO HER. i hope deception comes out soon because these types of naruto fanfics are my favorite

Good story, so is Naruto going to be completely dark or is he going to cheer up a bit as he faces things? Either way, I look forward to more. I like the relationship between him and Anko.