This is another good story and I actually read it in one sitting! I can totally picture this happening in real life. If you do a post Season 8 story it will definitely be interesting since Jack's on the run and he also let his vengeance get the best of him. He was very lucky that Chloe actually talked him out of assassinating Suvarov.

Good chapter. Interesting to see you feature Gohar here, this is the first fanfic to have featured that character. I can definitely picture him and Jack having this conversation even though Jack didn't become a Muslim.

Great story! The dialogue feels so real, I could really hear them saying those words.

Sweetheart, this is really good! I do love how you are working this because really, Jack and Tony friendship is kind of addicting. :) I'm glad you pm'd me and told me you had updated this because I never would have known.
I do have a critique and that is your grammer. It is very good but it does need a bit of work because you do tend to repeat some words over and over again. The wording needs a bit of work. But otherwise, you are doing a really good job! And yes, I am repeating myself because I just love this so much! :) Please update soon, okay?

So good. Please update!

Amazing. I love this. Please post more soon!

Great story. I just finished watching season 7 again and I hate that they didn't expand on how Jack dealt with Tony's betrayal. This story fills in the gap nicely

I still read 24 fanfiction! haha i love this fic and it's great that you've continued writting :)

i'd really want you this fic please :)

Oh, I wish you had continued this!

I love how you've set up the story here, how Kim made Jack see Tony's point of view, and how Jack is standing up for Tony. What Jack said ab Wilson not being free is worth a lot more than locking up Tony for good-great point! Think you are really doing great with this story

Great idea and I hope there is more on the way. Thanks for writing.

wow, this is phenomenal! please update soon.

I love how it's all in first person, and your plot makes it very believable. I'm pleased to see Steven and Teri in the picture...and very happy to see taht Steven and Jack aren't killing each other. I would like to know what happened to Renee, Chloe, and Janis though. But it's your story-please update!

-Phoenix

LIKE !

UPDATE !

Really like this story. I just found it. Can't wait for jack and tony to talk. So please update soon.