Awwwww. That was lovely and sad.

Very well written fanfic. I love that you stayed true to the characters. The ending is sad, but I really liked it 3
Loved the whole thing! Good job! :D

This was very well written, good job Just a few things to point out "Bennet" has only one "t". It's kind of annoying, but that's the way it is haha. Another thing: in the book Mr. Bingley goes away to London for business with a full intent of returning speedily. Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley's sisters follow and persuade him against returning. So he actually never gets to say goodbye. But I assume you are already aware of this. The cool thing is though that despite my knowing this, your fanfic still seemed very plausible which means you did a very good job writing it. If Mr. Bingley did in fact get to say farewell, this is how I'd picture it. I enjoyed it