This was a wonderful story. I was hesitant at first, reading the summary, but the story was amazing. Yugi was so different and yet so him and Atemu was just a shy version of the great pharaoh. This is a story that I will surely visit again.

Ahhhh that was adorable oh gosh! I love these two so much!
They're so cute and ahhhhh this was such a treat to readddddddddd.
That confession scene was TOO CUTE AND I SQUEALED OUT LOUD YAAAAAS. Yugi is precious and I'm in love. I love the way it was handled, and how Atem was all 'shut up and kiss me', nice niceeee.
Also the scene with the wine, yes please! So nice, and the soft confessions from Atem were so sweet, and then when Yugi said he loved him I just MMMMMMM died. And Atem realising it later in a comical 'spits drink' moment ahaha, NICE.
The ending was perfect and Atem shoving half the chocolate back on the shelves made me laugh so hard. They're so in love and I'm crying because it's perfect.
Thank you for writing this! I loved it so, so much, and I'm glad I got the chance to read it!
-Ashe

I love how you reversed the roles and made Yugi the slightly more dominant one. I think that the story is absolutely brilliant. Though I would have loved to see the reactions that Atemu's friends had to meeting Yugi for the first time, they probably thought that he was on something LOL.

Well, since one should not break Law, I shall love them with all of my heart and soul and bod! I shall love them 'til death do us part... Actually, that's a bit too long...

This is ridiculously cute! I loved the entire thing. I loved your characterisation of all your characters - Ryou's sass was just glorious. There was a great balance and I immensely enjoyed the story! Though I do wonder what Marlet meant by "time is running out" that was never really resolved in the plot.

I loved it :'3 It was just amazingly well written from begin to end.

Oh gosh I love the personality you put into these two, especially since most of the fandom would have reversed their roles. It's refreshing to see Yuugi in the older/slightly more dominant position for once as opposed to Atem.

I like this. It's hard to find something adorable, happy, and romantic. You took the perfect picture. Cheers.

This was so cute :)

lol I love how Yugi not only says he's gay, but VERY gay XD.

And I have no idea what's wrong with your airport scene, I didn't think there was anything wrong with it.

As so saaad. Yuugi's leaving! And man all this secret messages Yuugi's giving out..

"Oh, there's the camera. Honestly, Até, you could have said something."

My favorite part. XD

Definitely a favorite for me, I love the roles you've given each character. Most people would've made Atemu the outgoing photographer, and Yuugi the shy student, so this is a great change. It's a wonderful story, and I'll try to review the last chapter too. ;P

This whole story was so awesome! I absolutely love confident Yuugi/shy Atemu mix!

That was SO damn cute. An amazing story in four chapters!

Thanks!

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-Darkie

Aye~ So sweet~ x3 Atemu being younger and shorter than Yuugi is so funny 8D and such a sight to see if there's anyone drawing it xD I would like to see that

Ah! But we can't forget, you use the name Yami for that cat xD You turned him into a black cat xD I bet he's really jealous of Atemu then