Wow, that was so cool. McGee mad and hurt and accusing and yelling and walking out! Excellent. Feeling guilty Tim? Fight it.

McGee and Ziva you are having a laugh I know its fanfiction but really please never in a million years will this happen

awesome story! :)

I'm happy for Tim and Ziva!;)

But DiNozzo deserves some real shit for denying the maricle of life with in Ziva, and I hope he suffers greatly.

loved the way u ended the story... will there be a sequel?

too much Dinozzo for me...i'm a McGeek so ya. but good plot and i like how she ended up with Timmy in the end.

Good story

Priceless! This chapter was hilarious - loved the 'Coupling' references. It makes sense that Ziva would take that position. And how she complains that the model of the woman wasn't truly accurate!

I'm glad Tony's going to the hospital. Can't wait for more! :D

please update soon:)

please update soon:)

Great story. I hope Ziva reconsiders making the child legally McGee's though. Its no reflection on Tony and they have said they will tell the child and he can be involved if he likes. But what about poor Tim? He is risking everything for Ziva and the child. What if something happens to Ziva? Car accident or killed on the job? The child that he (McGee)considers his isn't legally his anything so Zivas father or even Tonys father or another relative could come and take the child away from Tim, the only father the child knows and there wouldn't be anything Tim could do about it. wouldn't be fair.

Now Ziva has been clear that her heart belongs to Tim are they going to get married? I think that would make McGee happy as hes kind of a traditional guy...and maybe if more kids come along then they get to be a family together.

Anyway love the story and I hope Tony learns some lessions. Better it happens now than ending up old and alone and wondering why. He still has a chance...materinity nurse in the hospital? McGee's sister? :) Then they would be brothers in law and uncles to each others children anyway...or is that just making it all too complicated. :)

please update soon:)

please update soon:)

Tim just can't seem to get past the feelings of insecurity he has around Tony. The title of the story is truly appropriate!

Complicated is a very good title. This is complicated, has any one told Gibbs who the father really is? Keep writing