This is perfection

Kisuke is so funny! :)

Poor Soi Fon, that's gotta suck being attacked by apples all the time. Very rarely do I comment on stories on , but when I do it's because they bring me great joy and/or amusement!

excellent funny as hell kisuke going to get it lol great story dude

Haha, poor soi fon. This is a nice fic. Plus I really like soi fon and yoruichi, though I've never read a fic about them as an item. It's cute.

LOL. What're the chances Urahara would get that apple and then hit Soifon with it. He really better hope he doesn't get caught I'd hate to imagine what Soifon would do to him. LOL.

Although I don't normally go for yuri/yaoi stories, I really liked this one. Your descriptions are so vivid and detailed and the interaction between Yoruichi and Soifon felt very in-character and natural and it was oddly quaint as well. Very good job overall.

Keep up the good work!

~Amulet

LOL This was good :D And funny XD

I don't review often, but I have to say that I love this story. Very cute and well written ) I couldn't help but giggle when Urahara and Tesai found the apple, but I burst out laughing when it hit Soi AGAIN XD

Lol, oh this was great! Especially loved the ending :p

Hahahaha! That was awesome xD So adorable!

por Soi...love the story...it's funny...]

lol i realy liked that poor soi and yoruichi is so sweet love these litle 1 shots cant w8t to see more :)

so you've basically... become my favorite writer for short stories of yorusoi. i seriously have enjoyed all the stories you've written for this pairing, you always leave me wanting more. haha, i sort of liked this kid factor you brought into this story, both of 'em hating kids and such. i see them like that the same way. XD glad im not alone, if thats what you were trying to portray?

Aw, poor Soi Fon. _ I hope Urahara gets what's coming to him. lol

Love it. _