I love the starting quote of this chapter! "White always moves first in a game of chess." It's bloody brilliant applied to this fandom!

That was absolutely magnificent. SO well done, it felt as if it was actually happening somehow...I could SEE it. And so entwined in the spirit and characters of Good Omens itself...all I can say is WELL DONE YOU!

Loved it :D

goodness gracious i can't guess what's going to happen next!this is very original indeed, and great, and interesting, and, guh i'll just keep on reading.

"when Crowley had threatened to shove Aziraphale into the duck pond if he wouldn't treat him to lunch, but that had never actually come to pass; Aziraphale had eventually caved"

aawww!

"determinedly ignoring their screams with practiced ease"

lol

you're plot,though i'm still on chap 2, seems well organized and thought. and i really appreciate your note at the bottom.

This is excellent. I love 19 year old Adam, telling people he's the antichrist in order to get some play. Seems like a great story, I'm going to keep at it.

That was an amazing read~ I have a thing for stories synonymous with chess, but even besides that this was awesome! I love your portrayal of the characters, they're so believable. I also really like your supporting cast too, they don't feel out of place but they do look like they're really confused sometimes xDD Once again, that was awesome! Great job~

Great story, I really enjoyed it. Your writing is flawless and you write the characters very well.

Wonderful story! I look forward to your next one!

great ending. I loved the confrontation between god and satan - lol'ed at the "stop being so dramatic." Very nicely done all around.

Please update! This is quite brilliant - the plot is awesome, and would make for a fabulous sequel; the characters are perfectly in character, the OC demons are a lot of fun, the pacing is great...

Just as a personal opinion, I'm not that into the characterisation of Molly, though. Sometimes I feel as though how she's written is too old for an eight year old, like the things she says, and sometimes too young... I don't know, maybe I'm nit-picking, but that was the only thing that I wasn't into.

Other than that, top notch! I love how you incorporate elements from the book, but still manage to make the whole thing stay really original and interesting. Can't wait to see how it ends up :)

(also, have you by any chance read Paradise Lost? Crowley's great escape from Hell was wonderfully familiar, I thought that part was brill)

Absolutely astounding. I love everything about it; it's very rare that you actually find a story that seems like it could really be a sequel. You've written it just as it should be, and the way you've sort of buried all the emotions under the words... I can't really explain it, but it's perfect.

I really, really, REALLY hope you finish soon, because I'm dying to know what happens.

Awsome fic! Please update soon!

UPDATE YOU D8 I was totally hooked and then I got uberly pissed when I saw that it wasn't over yet. D:

Naaah, just sayin'. I only recently got back to ffnet. 8D

I love you. ;O;

Fantastic! Please keep writing this. Your characterizations are unusually apt!